The winds brushed the clouds away, unveiling millions of stars that glistened like diamonds in the night sky. Every flicker was a smile as if to say they have finally arrived— that they’ve been looking forward to see me.
“Hello there, gorgeous.” I winked at Cassiopeia. The sight of those five bright stars forming a “W” (or M) reminded me of home. Beneath this profound darkness, I lay half awake amidst the hatchery of shimmering lights. My thoughts traveled from present to past, past to future. Images of people and places and laughter and tears flashed before my eyes. Every memory sparked with a bigger explosion and I was left with vertigo as if plunging downward into an abyss.
I felt lost more than ever.
My eyes opened to see nothing but a stretch of nocturnal sky. “Will you just tell me why am I here?” I pleaded the winds.
© 2016 Maria. All Rights Reserved.
Today’s Filipino word prompt is “muni-muni” which means “to think deeply or to ponder”. Whenever I try to think deeply, I always end up talking to myself. So here’s a sequel to a short fiction I wrote for Friday Fictioneers entitled, Soliloquy. The image above is a courtesy of Shawn Malone.
Come on! Write a poem or a fiction
Snap a photo under the sun
A six-word tale or a long post, perhaps?
Let’s all get word-high this July!
Want to join the fun? Find the prompt words HERE! Don’t forget to pingback & use the tag WordHighJuly. Mazel tov! 😉
July 7, 2016 at 12:11 am
I love that, a stretch of nocturnal sky! 🙂
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July 7, 2016 at 7:28 pm
Thank you, Ladylee! 🙂
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July 7, 2016 at 12:47 am
Oh wow! Even my next post was going to be about sky! The heavens do instigate us to muni muni 🙂
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July 7, 2016 at 7:29 pm
Yes, it does. 🙂 Will be hoping over read your post the soonest! Thank you, Prab.
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July 7, 2016 at 1:00 am
So good!
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July 7, 2016 at 7:30 pm
Thank you, Sarah! 🙂 🙂
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July 8, 2016 at 1:15 am
Of course! 😊
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July 9, 2016 at 9:36 am
💕💕💕
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July 7, 2016 at 1:22 am
I think you are here so you can spread your joy and words and smiles with the world 🙂
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July 7, 2016 at 7:30 pm
And I think you are here for the very same reason too! 🙂 🙂
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July 7, 2016 at 3:05 am
Beautiful!
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July 7, 2016 at 7:31 pm
Thank you, Josslyn! 🙂
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July 7, 2016 at 8:27 pm
You’re welcome, Maria! 🙂
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July 7, 2016 at 3:16 am
I thought this was lovely, my only critique would be taking care with tense, (I know it’s catching me out too sometimes which is why I seem to pick it up everywhere I see it now) I noticed a couple of lines in this where it mixed between past and present which threw me a little when reading although the style was very serene.
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July 7, 2016 at 7:33 pm
Awwee… Thank you, Sam! I appreciate it very much. ❤ Argh, I did missed that part… Did I miss some more? Please let me know. 🙂 Smiles to you!
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July 7, 2016 at 10:31 am
I especially LOVE the phrase, “hatchery of shimmering lights”–WOWZA!
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July 7, 2016 at 7:35 pm
WOWZA! Thank youuuu, Stella. 🙂 🙂 🙂
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July 8, 2016 at 6:13 am
Most welcome always!
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July 9, 2016 at 9:43 am
❤️❤️❤️
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July 9, 2016 at 9:45 am
🙂
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July 7, 2016 at 11:45 am
Love this! Such beautiful imagery created with your words. Love it.
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July 7, 2016 at 7:37 pm
Glad you enjoyed it! Thank you, Marie~ 🙂 ❤
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July 7, 2016 at 4:39 pm
This is great. The last line sums up perfectly how I am feeling lately. “Why am I here?”….I would love to have the answer to that, why I am here and what I am meant to do.
Have a blessed day!
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July 7, 2016 at 7:40 pm
Same goes for me… Still, I guess not knowing the answer gives us hope and fuel our spirit in facing each day. It gives us something to look forward to. It gives as something to ponder and look within ourselves. 🙂 Have a blessed day, Suzanne!
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July 7, 2016 at 8:21 pm
I can see what you’re saying. At my age (almost 51), though, it is frustrating to not know. I feel like my time will be up and I won’t have fulfilled what Heavenly Father sent me here to do. It does have me spending a lot of each day pondering what I should be doing. 🙂 Thank you. You have a blessed day, too.
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July 7, 2016 at 10:05 pm
Oh…I am sure that even though you think that you still have a lot more to fulfill, He never kept a blind eyes at what you have already done, Suzzane. Those beautiful things, big and small, always counts to Him. *hugs*
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July 7, 2016 at 10:08 pm
Thank you, Maria, for this encouragement. You are right. It is just hard to remember sometimes. {{{Hugs}}} Have a beautiful day. 🙂
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July 7, 2016 at 10:19 pm
You are most welcome, Suzzane. 🙂 I feel the same most of the times too, but I try to shake them off and focus on the good things (as long as I can). It’s a good night for me right now. Enjoy the rest of the day. ❤
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July 7, 2016 at 10:40 pm
You folks are giving me some good things to focus on, too. I am enjoying all of the comments. Have a great night and sweet dreams. Thank you. 🙂
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July 7, 2016 at 5:37 pm
I think this is a very good poem. It is not unusual to ask ourselves or others, “Why am I here.” Sometimes we ask those things out loud and surprise ourselves. I see no tense problem.
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July 7, 2016 at 7:48 pm
I love those moments… when we ask things and surprise ourselves with the answers! Thank you, David. 🙂
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July 8, 2016 at 12:00 am
Beautiful words Maria. I think the magnitude of the Universe draws those questions out of us to reflect on. Thank you
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July 9, 2016 at 9:33 am
So true… It makes us realize that we’re just tiny specks in a field, too. Thank you, D!
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July 8, 2016 at 5:36 am
Reading your poem was an absolute delight! Thanks for sharing.
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July 9, 2016 at 9:40 am
And reading your comment is equally delightful, Gilda! Smiles! 😊😊😊
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July 8, 2016 at 11:35 am
now those are some deep thoughts! Fantastic Maria!
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July 9, 2016 at 9:44 am
Soo deep I got lost in it. Haha! Thank you, Mel. 😁✌🏿
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July 11, 2016 at 12:13 pm
You’re welcome 🙂 that’s the best kind of writing when it sweeps you away
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July 12, 2016 at 6:31 am
I agree.. ☺️ We all have those moments, right?
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July 12, 2016 at 9:22 pm
Yes we do! 🙂
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July 10, 2016 at 4:31 pm
oh geeeeeez. is she lost? or just having some muni muni!! lovely descriptions, dearie!
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July 12, 2016 at 6:25 am
I guess not literally lost… Just some aimless muni-muni that we sometimes have. 😊😊😊
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July 12, 2016 at 10:03 am
gotcha! 😀
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