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One Sigh At A Time

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One Sigh At A Time

I loosen my grip
Of your memories
One sigh at a time—

Join the crowd
To unhear the sound
Of your voice
Watch the city lights
To unsee the colors
Of your eyes

One sigh at a time
One step forward
To being free
MS


In response to dVerse’s Quadrille #40: Free hosted by De with her piece, When Towes Fall. Image source: Pinterest

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  1. Ohhhhh. “One sigh at a time” is just such a lovely thought. Like a breath, but deeper.

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  2. To unhear the sound of a voice and unsee the color of a person’s eyes, I wonder how long this takes. Lovely poem.

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  3. I like the idea that each sigh leads one to forgetting and freedom.

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  4. Oh wow wow wow, oh my my my! I love the first 3 lines best, but the whole piece is stellar–WOW! (Jael/Stella, here–just to keep you on your toes, I’ve changed blogs again 🙂 )

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  5. I feel that each sigh is one shackle breaking.. love the use of unwords

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  6. This was a wonderful piece! Loved the “one sigh at a time”. It takes a lot of them, doesn’t it? This is what I tried to capture in my “Letting Go Is Hard” too.
    Chuck

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  7. Beautiful! You captured the art and process of moving on. Thank God you didn’t call it ‘ One drink at a time’😂😂

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  8. each breath takes you further away and farther afield – lovely soft stepping through this poem

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  9. I love the pace of this poem. Reading it slows you down. Your words show there is so much to be found in a sigh Maria.

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  10. join the crowd to unhear, unsee… nice

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  11. A very moving write Maria and I hope that with every sigh you will be able to reclaim another lost part of yourself 💜

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  12. ‘One sigh at a time’ speaks well to sadness and moving on

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  13. “Join the crowd
    To unheard the sound”
    ^Is there a slight typo here? Did you mean to unhear?

    Your poetry, as always, is soothing and poignant, dear Maria ❤

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  14. The sign of breath = the sign of freedom. So moving and incredible write.

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  15. I especially like the first stanza. Nice poem about the difficulty of letting go and the freedom that eventually comes.

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  16. Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet and commented:
    Come read Maria’s journey taking “One Sigh At A Time” It takes a lot of them to move on.

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  17. Oooohhhh..
    Long pause….then sigh….ahhh so beautiful..

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