On some days, not all lights lead you on course
On some nights, not all darks hails a foul force
Some lights are made to mislead
Lead you astray just to bleed
While dark nights hint a home free of remorse
Written for Mind and Life Matters’ Limerick Challenge Week 15: Dark
Here’s to finding peace and tranquility in the night after a day of stumbling down and scrapping knees. 🙂
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April 14, 2016 at 4:06 pm
This is great. I’ve never been good with limericks.
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April 15, 2016 at 12:28 pm
Oh, I’m sure you’ll do just great. Hmm.. maybe one of these days we’ll be reading your limericks? 😀
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April 15, 2016 at 2:10 pm
I will try and let you know if I make a decent attempt 😛
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April 14, 2016 at 4:33 pm
Nice reminder that light isn’t always good and dark bad.
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April 15, 2016 at 12:29 pm
Aye to that! 😀
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April 14, 2016 at 4:59 pm
Loved it!! Great
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April 15, 2016 at 12:33 pm
Thank you! 😀
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April 14, 2016 at 5:11 pm
Oooh! I love this. I’ve never tried limericks. Hmm, maybe someday I should…
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April 15, 2016 at 12:42 pm
You should! It’s be fun having you around in our limerick prompts. 😀
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April 14, 2016 at 5:21 pm
Lovely, Maria. I love the way you show that dark is not always bad.
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April 15, 2016 at 12:42 pm
Thank you, Millie.. 🙂
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April 14, 2016 at 5:51 pm
oooooohhh. this is haunting!!! the stark contrast of bad light and good dark is beautifully presented! 😀
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April 15, 2016 at 12:45 pm
Thank you, thank you dear Rosema! Do you agree? 🙂 I think sometimes when we lose ourselves in the dark, we find our inner selves.
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April 16, 2016 at 3:49 am
That is true, very well said!
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