Do you ever stop and listen to the lapping waves, rolling back and forth to the shore? Do you notice the singing birds soaring above the cerulean skies? Do you hear the children’s laughter on Saturday afternoons? Do you ever feel your beating heart?
Close your eyes. Listen. What do you hear?
I am Apollo, son of Zeus and Leto, God of Music. I’m a fine-looking chap who used to carry a golden lyre until mankind, in your most pragmatic way, has modernized my old-fashioned approach. So here I am, strumming an electric guitar burning with passion.
Mortals tend to make music louder— thinking the loudest sound reaches the farthest place. But I can hear everything from up here, even the softest hum. You’ve changed music a lot, too— some to my liking, some not. Still, I love it when a song stirs a memory and a rhythm calms a heart. I love it when you take my key to chart a journey to a new world.
Close your eyes. Listen. What do you hear?
Word Count: 175
Here is for Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers prompt. This week’s photo prompt is provided by pixabay. It reminds me of Mitch’s The Magic Strings of Frankie Presto and the Greek God, Apollo. 🙂
Apollo is one of the most complex and important gods, and is the god of many things, including: music, poetry, art, oracles, archery, plague, medicine, sun, light and knowledge. He is the son of Zeus and the Titan Leto, and was born in the Greek island of Delos
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March 2, 2016 at 3:27 pm
Lovely lines about music. 🙂 And I am more than happy that this photo reminded you of The Magic Strings of Frankie Presto. ❤
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March 3, 2016 at 10:07 am
Thank you, Rosema! It really reminds me of The Magic Strings of Frankie Presto, I was planning to focus on the the magic strings but I ended up with Apollo. Haha
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March 3, 2016 at 12:47 pm
Haha. Either way I know it would be wonderful! 😀
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March 3, 2016 at 2:02 pm
YAY! Thanks! 😀
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March 3, 2016 at 3:59 pm
You are welcome! ❤
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March 3, 2016 at 7:56 pm
🙂 🙂 🙂
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March 2, 2016 at 3:34 pm
Great story from Apollo’s POV. Thanks for the background of Apollo too. 😀
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March 3, 2016 at 10:09 am
Glad you enjoyed it, Fun! Thank you. 😀
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March 2, 2016 at 4:09 pm
Lovely story, and I like the idea of the gods moving with the times 🙂
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March 3, 2016 at 10:10 am
Ha! I guess Apollo have no choice but to get along with progress and with his electric guitar. Thanks, Ali! 😀
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March 2, 2016 at 11:49 pm
This is wonderful! Apollo, the son of Zeus and Letos, God of Music! I love how you used myths to build your story. Sometimes I think the same thing about music. Why does it have to be so loud! Wonderful story, Maria!
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March 3, 2016 at 10:17 am
Thank you, PJ! You’ve provided an interesting photo prompt. 😀
I feel the same way, too. Some mainstream music nowadays are too loud and full of screaming. Although these songs have interesting lyrics, the meaning of the song got overshadowed by the noise that goes with it. Too bad.
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March 3, 2016 at 10:18 am
I completely agree with you. 🙂
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March 3, 2016 at 1:57 pm
🙂 🙂 🙂
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March 3, 2016 at 2:57 am
I like the take on the prompt of making it a (good) god of music instead of the devil — clever idea, and so lovely the way you did it.
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March 3, 2016 at 10:29 am
Thank you, Joy! Glad you enjoyed it. 🙂 I was thrilled when I read one of the entries, it was Mark’s I think. His take was something about a bet between Satan and God, whether man’s music will lead to strengthened faith or end up with drugs, sex, & alcohol. It sparked my interest that I decided to use Apollo’s POV in my story, plus this has some hint from Mitch Albom’s book. 😀
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March 3, 2016 at 10:52 am
Oh cool, it’s extra fun when the other stories help prompt you too!
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March 3, 2016 at 6:41 am
I enjoyed this take on a mythical God controlling music. I never knew that about Apollo. I like how you talk about his point of view seeing what music people come up with across time, some that he likes and some that he doesn’t. It definitely fits the prompt picture well!
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March 3, 2016 at 10:44 am
Thanks a lot, Mandi! Glad you enjoyed it. 🙂 I think that is what Apollo would be thinking if he does exist- how music has changed from the past to present, and how it’ll continue to evolve in the future.
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March 3, 2016 at 11:32 am
Yes, that is a very interesting thought 🙂
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March 3, 2016 at 11:28 am
This is so creative and so wonderfully written. Outstanding, Maria!! I loved that you wrote about Apollo and the way you used the line about the guitar burning with passion. Seriously great take on the prompt!
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March 3, 2016 at 2:01 pm
Thank you so much, Jade. Glad you enjoyed it. 😀 I still do hope Apollo wouldn’t mind me replacing his golden lyre with the burning guitar. Haha!
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March 3, 2016 at 11:49 pm
I don’t think he would. On the contrary, I think he would be quite pleased that you’ve adapted him to the times 😉
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March 4, 2016 at 12:24 pm
YAY! That’s a relief then. *sigh* 😀 😀 😀
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March 4, 2016 at 5:59 am
I really enjoy your story telling style!!
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March 4, 2016 at 12:25 pm
I’m glad you enjoyed the story, Sam. Thanks a lot. 🙂
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March 5, 2016 at 12:23 am
Interesting – a very unique take on the photo. Liked it.
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March 5, 2016 at 11:04 pm
Thanks, Russell. Glad you liked it. 🙂
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March 6, 2016 at 2:12 am
I like the concept from Zeus’ pov. Cool piece.
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March 7, 2016 at 10:50 am
Glad you enjoyed it. 🙂
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