Hear me, please?
A Free Verse
I asked the whistling wind
To chase after you
Take my message, let you know
I begged the pristine water
To follow your course
Tell you I’m sorry for letting you go
I pleaded the muddy earth
To track your trails
Lead us to a crossroad; my love,
Can we start anew?
© 2016 Maria. All Rights Reserved.
In response to Shapeshifting 13 #44 KICKOFF: This week, in exactly 52 words, your challenge is to write a story or poem inspired by and using any form of the following word(s):
DoodleScribbles 
March 11, 2016 at 12:36 pm
Oh. I felt the regret, the anxiety, the pain, the fear and of course the hope. 🙂 Another heartfelt piece my dear, Maria. ❤
P.S.
I think the you in 5thbline should be your? 😉
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March 11, 2016 at 1:42 pm
Awwee! You’re such an angel Rosema. 🙂 Thank you pointing another miss from me. I really need people like you! ❤❤❤
And I’m glad you enjoyed this one. 😀
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March 11, 2016 at 1:45 pm
Yay! You’re welcome dear! 😀 😀 😀
And yes, I ‘feel’ you with this one. and also with the next one!
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March 11, 2016 at 4:12 pm
Lovely poem. I think we all regret letting at least one person go…
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March 12, 2016 at 12:38 am
Thanks, Ali! 🙂 I completely agree… Regrets do never come first.
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March 11, 2016 at 8:49 pm
What an awesome way to express the feeling of trying to get back someone ❤ And the gif perfectly suits it 🙂
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March 12, 2016 at 12:45 am
Thank you so much Srivi! 🙂 🙂 🙂
Glad to find that gif, too. It took me quite some time to find the perfect one. ❤
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March 11, 2016 at 11:52 pm
Lovely, Maria! May I ask you where you get your “moving” photos?
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March 12, 2016 at 1:05 am
Thanks, PJ! 🙂
Oh about that, I just googled it. Most moving photos (GIF) I use came from Tumblr. I upload its link address on my library.
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March 12, 2016 at 1:06 am
Thank you so much!
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March 12, 2016 at 1:18 am
You’re welcome PJ! Google finds a lot of GIFs… it just depends on the keyword though. Are you planning on using one? 🙂
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March 12, 2016 at 1:19 am
No, I just wondered where people were getting them. Maybe someday in the future but no plans at this time.
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March 12, 2016 at 8:06 am
I see… sometimes GIFs conveys the message well too. 😀 Looking forward to it. Hmm… wouldn’t it be fun if GIFs are used as prompts? That would be a first one! 😀
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March 12, 2016 at 8:09 am
Actually, that crossed my mind! But, I will only use public photos in my challenges that are “free to use.” I know that pixabay are “free to use” images.
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March 14, 2016 at 12:10 pm
Oh, yes. Pixabay has been generous. I know freepik.com also offers free images but Pixabay has more images, I guess. 🙂
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March 14, 2016 at 6:52 pm
I didn’t know about freepix
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March 12, 2016 at 4:34 am
Beautiful!
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March 14, 2016 at 12:07 pm
Thank you, Mandi… 🙂
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March 12, 2016 at 11:02 am
Oh, this is beautiful!
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March 14, 2016 at 12:12 pm
Glad to hear that. Thank you.. 🙂
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