Bill Ortega, the world’s wealthiest man with a net worth of $143.7 billion, sat weak and powerless on the bedside. For sixty years, he lived life as a race, never stopping to take a break. But how he wished he did.
Lying on deathbed was his wife Ligaya, her body a shrunken leaf. He couldn’t help but let out a sob. “Honey?” she asked, her face lined with pain.
“I should have slowed my life down.” he lamented, “I don’t want to lose-
“You’re not, you never will.” she differed, “Remember your favorite hourglass? I tilted it.”
Confused, he asked why.
“To slow my time down.”
Then Ligaya gave him her sweetest smile.
Word Count: 113
Here’s for this week’s Friday Fictioneers prompt. The photo prompt is a courtesy of Sandra Crook which reminds me three things, 1) to seize the day, 2) live life to the fullest, and 3) to savor every moment. 🙂 🙂 🙂
Friday Fictioneers s a weekly writing challenge hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields where a photo is used as a prompt for a hundred-word piece of fiction.
Enjoy more stories here. 🙂
February 23, 2016 at 9:01 am
Uhhhhuhhh. 🙂 🙂 🙂
The truths you told in between the touching lines are just so touching to read. 🙂 The softness and the simplicity also made this short tale more moving.
Another well-done piece, my dear! ❤
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February 23, 2016 at 11:58 am
Another lovely comment from you, Rosema. Thank you! 😍 It took me some time to come up with a story coz I was thinking of Mitch’s The Time Keeper, My GF is a Gumiho, and Beauty and the Beast at the same time. Haha. Glad I come up with this one. 😀
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February 23, 2016 at 2:42 pm
HAHAHAHA!!! I think you have incorporated them all! Because this one is truly truly heartfelt. ❤
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February 23, 2016 at 9:32 pm
Hahaha! You really are the best supporter in blogosphere, Rosema! 😀 ❤
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February 24, 2016 at 8:00 am
Oh no! I am justvstating facts here, Maria. 😘😘😘
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February 24, 2016 at 11:25 am
Oh, now you’re making me smile a lot. 😘😘😘
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February 24, 2016 at 11:26 am
HAHAY! That is soooo true, Maria! 😀
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February 24, 2016 at 12:03 pm
😍 😍 😍
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February 23, 2016 at 10:37 am
It’s amazing how much emotion and depth you’ve managed to put in so little words. There’s such a profound message here too. What a lovely story to remind us to slow things down sometimes. Great job, Maria 🙂
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February 23, 2016 at 12:04 pm
Thank you so much, Jade. 😍 I, myself, am guilty of living life like it’s a race sometimes. It’s great to be reminded to savor each passing moment. Thanks to the photo. 🙂
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February 23, 2016 at 11:55 am
Sweet, lovely story! She slowed time down for him.
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February 23, 2016 at 12:14 pm
I hope they would be granted a time extension to be with each other. Thank you, PJ. 😍
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February 23, 2016 at 12:17 pm
That would be so nice!
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February 23, 2016 at 7:54 pm
Yes! 🙂 🙂 🙂
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February 23, 2016 at 1:14 pm
So sweet yet sad that she’s dying. A wonderful message for us to slow our pace and enjoy every single moment as if it is the last. 🙂
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February 23, 2016 at 9:06 pm
Who knows, tilting the hourglass may work? 😀 Let’s carpe diem, Fun! 🙂
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February 24, 2016 at 6:42 am
It would be so magical… Maybe it’s a special hourglass left behind by a wizard. Maybe Ligaya was his disciple, so he grant her a special request. Oh… This sparks off new inspiration to a novel! 😀
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February 24, 2016 at 11:21 am
Oh I love your playful imagination, Fun! 🙂 Hey, why don’t you start a new one? I would love to read a magical piece from you. 😀 ❤
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February 24, 2016 at 11:24 am
Me? Hmm… I wonder where it will lead to! LOL! 😀 A huge challenge! 😀
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February 24, 2016 at 11:44 am
I’m sure it will lead to an exciting tale and adventure. I’m rooting for you! 😀 😀
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February 24, 2016 at 11:47 am
Thank you so much, my dear 😍😍😍
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February 24, 2016 at 12:06 pm
You’re most welcome, Fun. I’m really looking forward to it. 😀 😀 😀
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February 24, 2016 at 12:11 pm
☺️❤️❤️❤️
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February 24, 2016 at 12:23 pm
Have a great day, Fun! 🙂 🙂 🙂
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February 24, 2016 at 12:26 pm
Thanks! ❤️ Have a wonderful day too, Maria! Two more days to Weekend! 😄❤️❤️❤️
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February 24, 2016 at 3:42 pm
It’s busy, but a wonderful day nonetheless. 😄 Oh, glad you have only two days left before the weekend. To bad I need to work on the last Saturday of the month.
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February 24, 2016 at 3:46 pm
It’s the last Saturday… Already? Time really flies.
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February 24, 2016 at 4:04 pm
Yes, already! Time flies like a flash. The next time we wake up, we’ll be hearing Christmas songs. 😀
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February 24, 2016 at 4:15 pm
Oh…I love that… Ok I better sleep now so that it’s Christmas when I wake! Hahaha! 😀
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February 24, 2016 at 7:33 pm
Did you sleep well? Too bad it’s not yet Christmas though… *sending Christmas carols to you*
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February 24, 2016 at 7:34 pm
😂😂😂 I can wait! Just 10 months away! (Received your carols! Thanks! My head is ringing with bells now! Hahahaha!)
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February 24, 2016 at 9:41 pm
10 months, 10 weeks, 10 days, 10 hours, 10 minutes, 10 seconds… we could always wait for Christmas. 😀 You’re most welcome, Fun! Hohoho
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February 25, 2016 at 6:04 am
Yes! We will always wait for Christmas! 😄❤️❤️❤️
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February 23, 2016 at 4:14 pm
I guess he’s finally realising there’s more to life than racing round all the time in the pursuit of money.
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February 23, 2016 at 9:40 pm
That’s absolutely true nowadays… tsk.
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February 23, 2016 at 11:23 pm
This is so sweet. She knows what counts, he has to learn it the hard way.
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February 24, 2016 at 11:15 am
Thank you, Gah. 🙂 It’s saddening that he has to learn it the hard way though but they still have time to make up..
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February 24, 2016 at 3:23 pm
I hope it works. 🙂
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February 24, 2016 at 4:01 pm
Oh, I believe it will. 😀 My friend just wrote a part two, the hourglass works! 😀
https://simplymewrites.wordpress.com/2016/02/24/the-hourglass-part-2/
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February 25, 2016 at 2:24 pm
we only slow down when hardly any time is left, great piece
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February 25, 2016 at 5:48 pm
I couldn’t agree more… Thanks for dropping by. 🙂
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