
above the india-inked sky
pinpricks of light tremble
as he takes his wordless fall
while the gods play on filthy floors
one last call…
one last plead…
for any kind of recognition
hear his sorrow, feel his pain
tell the stars of his name
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In response to dVerse’s Quadrille: A Star (Poem) is Born hosted by De Jackson, aka WhimsyGizmo, who asks us to use some form of the word STAR and incorporate it in a 44-word poem.
Today, I’ve decided to honor Charles Dickens, one of the greatest novelist of the Victorian era, who was born on this day in 1812. This piece was inspired by a quote from his book, Great Expectations.
“I looked at the stars, and considered how awful it would be for a man to turn his face up to them as he froze to death, and see no help or pity in all the glittering multitude.”
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February 7, 2023 at 6:30 pm
Nicely done, Maria. I especially like the ‘india-inked sky’ where ‘pinpricks of light tremble’.
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February 8, 2023 at 2:28 pm
Thank you, Kim!
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February 7, 2023 at 7:12 pm
Wow, Maria! Beautiful…
~David
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February 7, 2023 at 9:37 pm
Oof. This one is a gut-punch!
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February 8, 2023 at 1:23 am
Your quadrille is gorgeous! The notes you added a nice touch, Dickens is quite an inspiration.
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February 8, 2023 at 1:44 am
Goodness. Such gorgeous word choices here, Maria. I especially love “tremble” and “india-inked.”
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February 8, 2023 at 4:13 am
Don’t look up. —- The night sky is clearer on those cold winter nights, and the universe doesn’t care one bit. Nicely done.
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February 8, 2023 at 6:11 am
Lovely poem that honors dear Mr. Dickens.
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February 9, 2023 at 4:58 am
I love that quote, and I do love the way you portray the icecold stare of the stars on any human destiny….
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