how does it feel to be enough?
to not be too much
or too less?
every day she puts on a brave front,
tries to flush doubt
down her mind
but
shame—
rose to her cheeks
fear—
crept up her nape
every. single. time.
© doodlescribbles
In response to dVerse’s Quadrille: Don’t Forget To… hosted by Mish who asks us to pen a poem of exactly 44 words inspired by the word “flush.”
April 21, 2020 at 3:26 pm
“Flush doubts “down our minds and inhale hope in our sanctuary , that’s what we must do
Stay safe Maria
Much💛love
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April 23, 2020 at 11:39 am
Ah yes, here’s to inhaling hope. ❤
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April 21, 2020 at 5:17 pm
the opening poses the questions and the emotions rise and creep in response. I like the ending too with that staccato punctuation
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April 23, 2020 at 11:40 am
Thank you, Laura. 🙂
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April 21, 2020 at 6:01 pm
I love how you ended it so strong. With 3 words, each a complete thought. And the periods made it even more solid..
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April 21, 2020 at 9:00 pm
Good point about our inability to feel we are enough.
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April 23, 2020 at 11:40 am
Something a lot of us can relate to.. thanks, Frank!
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April 22, 2020 at 3:21 am
Oh, she needs to know she is always enough, and what others think does not define her!!
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April 23, 2020 at 11:41 am
Hear, hear! Yes, it’s what we all need to hear, especially in this age of self-gratification.
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April 22, 2020 at 4:28 am
Those telltale signs of insecurity are often underserved, but I can see many who prey on such weaknesses. Alas.
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April 23, 2020 at 11:42 am
A sad reality, Bjorn. Sigh
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April 22, 2020 at 10:37 am
Insecurity… that beast is so strong…
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April 23, 2020 at 11:42 am
It’s a daily brawl with this beast.
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April 23, 2020 at 12:25 pm
I so hear ya, Maria.
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April 22, 2020 at 4:43 pm
i love how this is honest and raw. and may the flushing become more successful, with experience and time. ❤
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April 23, 2020 at 11:43 am
Awweee. thank you dearie. and yes, one day at a time. we will heal.
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April 28, 2020 at 12:29 pm
yes. ❤ yes. dearie. ❤
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April 23, 2020 at 3:42 am
I especially love the phrasing of your poem and the ending is strong.
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April 23, 2020 at 11:43 am
Thank you, Mish!
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April 23, 2020 at 8:20 am
Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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