These Eyes Are All Yours
The day is slowly fading into the night and I look outside from the glass window with anticipation. My eyes search the star-speckled sky but you are nowhere to be found. Perhaps you’re hanging on the other side.
Two hours. Two more hours until I get to see you, my love. My greed for you is burning. It is almost a sin. What should I tell you this time? Ah, poetry. I wrote something about you— yet again. I will read it later on. And music! I was playing Ed Sheeran’s Perfect a while ago and this beautiful song never fails to break my heart. You probably heard this a hundred times but you know I just have to say it.
There you are. Waiting just outside the lobby, casting your light to the branches. Curious how one tree is almost bare-naked while the other is thriving. We will talk about this too, but for now let me stare in silence.
oh dear winter moon
these eyes are all yours tonight
and all nights to come
In response to dVerse’s Haibun Monday: Fuyu No Tsuki hosted by Victoria C. Slotto. Technically, we do not have winter on my side of the Earth. But we do share the same moon, right? 🙂
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January 9, 2018 at 4:03 pm
Perhaps a compulsion – and not a sin?
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January 9, 2018 at 4:34 pm
Clap clap😊❤❤❤
Nice kayo idol ❤
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January 9, 2018 at 5:36 pm
Almost a sin? Well, a clandestine meeting in a hotel with a forbidden lover could indeed be just that! 😉 Cute romantic haibun.
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January 9, 2018 at 6:18 pm
Beautifully written. The picture complements your words so perfectly.
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January 9, 2018 at 7:49 pm
lovely Maria, you captured a lover’s longing so delicately here and your haiku is pure love.
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January 9, 2018 at 9:24 pm
The thought of the moon as a secret lover… The moon is perfect for whatever we want to make it into.
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January 9, 2018 at 10:56 pm
Nice photo and haibun combination. I can see the two trees, one without leaves. And the moon.
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January 10, 2018 at 12:04 am
The moon never disappoints! Lovely haibun, Maria 🙂
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January 10, 2018 at 1:40 am
Brilliant!
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January 10, 2018 at 2:46 am
Yes we do share the same moon, and I enjoyed your love letter/poem to her. The photographic image is spectacular, too.
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January 10, 2018 at 3:54 am
Beautiful love poem to the moon. 🙂
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January 10, 2018 at 3:56 am
What a beautiful poem!
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January 10, 2018 at 8:02 am
Such dedication to a winter moon. And so expressive a poem!
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January 11, 2018 at 6:15 am
Wonderful Haibun. The moon winter moon itself feels happy and peaceful. 🙂
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January 13, 2018 at 9:33 pm
The title alone is epic Maria..
P.S. hey did my christmas gift ever get there?
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January 13, 2018 at 10:34 pm
Awww glad you liked it, Mich! Thank you. AND!! Omg.. I haven’t received it yet. 😱 When was that?
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January 14, 2018 at 6:37 am
Oh noh…maraming hitches sa mga padala from our place last Christmas…ang iba nakarating ang iba still on transit…i will have to follow up…thank Maria..
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January 17, 2018 at 11:41 pm
Oh no… sana hindi na lost on transit. do you have the tracking number Mich?
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January 17, 2018 at 11:43 pm
I have spoken to the courier provider Maria and we are sorting things out .
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January 18, 2018 at 7:15 am
Ooh.. thank you Mich! And sorry, na bother ka pa. 🙈🙈
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