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These Eyes Are All Yours

These Eyes Are All Yours

The day is slowly fading into the night and I look outside from the glass window with anticipation. My eyes search the star-speckled sky but you are nowhere to be found. Perhaps you’re hanging on the other side.

Two hours. Two more hours until I get to see you, my love. My greed for you is burning. It is almost a sin. What should I tell you this time? Ah, poetry. I wrote something about you— yet again. I will read it later on. And music! I was playing Ed Sheeran’s Perfect a while ago and this beautiful song never fails to break my heart. You probably heard this a hundred times but you know I just have to say it.

There you are. Waiting just outside the lobby, casting your light to the branches. Curious how one tree is almost bare-naked while the other is thriving. We will talk about this too, but for now let me stare in silence.

oh dear winter moon
these eyes are all yours tonight
and all nights to come
MS


In response to dVerse’s Haibun Monday: Fuyu No Tsuki hosted by Victoria C. Slotto. Technically, we do not have winter on my side of the Earth. But we do share the same moon, right? 🙂

Head over here to join the fun!

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20 thoughts on “These Eyes Are All Yours

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  1. Perhaps a compulsion – and not a sin?

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  2. Clap clap😊❤❤❤
    Nice kayo idol ❤

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  3. Almost a sin? Well, a clandestine meeting in a hotel with a forbidden lover could indeed be just that! 😉 Cute romantic haibun.

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  4. Beautifully written. The picture complements your words so perfectly.

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  5. lovely Maria, you captured a lover’s longing so delicately here and your haiku is pure love.

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  6. The thought of the moon as a secret lover… The moon is perfect for whatever we want to make it into.

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  7. Nice photo and haibun combination. I can see the two trees, one without leaves. And the moon.

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  8. The moon never disappoints! Lovely haibun, Maria 🙂

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  9. Yes we do share the same moon, and I enjoyed your love letter/poem to her. The photographic image is spectacular, too.

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  10. Beautiful love poem to the moon. 🙂

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  11. Diana Tyler (Eccentric Muse)

    January 10, 2018 at 3:56 am

    What a beautiful poem!

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  12. Such dedication to a winter moon. And so expressive a poem!

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  13. Wonderful Haibun. The moon winter moon itself feels happy and peaceful. 🙂

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  14. The title alone is epic Maria..

    P.S. hey did my christmas gift ever get there?

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