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I Dream In Circles

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I Dream In Circles

I dream in circles
Chasing the tail end
Of what once was
Of what will never be
Running after a shadow
Calling out a name
Only to wake from
The ghost of a dream
That fades like a mist
At the hint of daybreak
MS


In response to dVerse’s Quadrille #38: Dream hosted by De. Image source: Favim

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  1. I can sometimes feel that chase myself… reiterate forever.

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  2. I love “I dream in circles.” Yes, it does seem like that. Well captured.

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  3. “Chasing the tail end
    Of what once was
    Of what will never be”

    oh. oh. oh my heart. T_T
    dearie. major feels!

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  4. Here, it is always night and day at the same time. So, dreaming is always a reality. Your circular rhythm is made up of gravity.

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  5. Oh, me too!
    ‘I dream in circles
    Chasing the tail end
    Of what once was’.

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  6. you have captured the momentum of the dream-world perfectly

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  7. Love it! You capture the intangible element of dreams perfectly.

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  8. Dream is that indeed! perfectly captivated.

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  9. Oooh, I love the way you pulled this together. 😍😍😍

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  10. Count me in…i dream in circles…i chase the tail end of what was once….

    Great job Maria..

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  11. “The ghost of a dream…” I love that, especially.

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  12. Beautifully penned Maria, I especially love ‘The ghost of a dream That fades like a mist At the hint of daybreak’ xxx

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  13. This poem is excellent maria. Do you ever wake from a dream and try to get back into it? If you find the secret let me know.

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  14. The ghost of a dream – dreams that still haunt long after they are gone. Lovely.

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  15. This was well captured, Maria.

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  16. I feel this as a shared experience. And that moment of Awakening when you want a piece it all together and it evaporates although it stays with you throughout the day as a vague undercurrent. Well expressed.

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  17. Maria, this was so elegant and simple but profound and moving! I loved what you and your muse did here! Especially the lines – “The ghost of a dream
    That fades like a mist
    At the hint of daybreak”

    I feel that in the mornings sometimes too! Thanks so much for this!!! Love your Photo Icon!
    Chuck

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  18. Dream is just this. Perfectly put.

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  19. I dream in circles too. Love your words!
    Anna :o]

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  20. Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet and commented:
    Please come and enjoy Maria’s post on dreaming – “I Dream In Circles”. See if you feel like this too!

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  21. I like the image of circling round the dream…can’t quite catch it sometimes. (K)

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  22. I like these two lines:
    “Of what once was
    Of what will never be” No repeating of the past.

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