Dead-reckoning
With a languid gait, she walks towards the stream. The scent of fall leaves hang in the air as her feet press the ground. She is a natural beauty, that’s what they say. But before her reflection, she only sees sadness hiding beneath a feigned smile. Her face embedded with years of self-doubt. The water feels like a looking glass and she dives into the labyrinth of her gritty past. She swims into the muffled silence, recalling her feats and defeats, descending to the very beginning of her life. And she surfaced proud. Today is her dead-reckoning.
Rivers of the past
Coursing through her memories
Running wide and deep
In response to MindLoveMisery’s Menagerie’s Wordle #168 hosted by Yves. Photography by Alessio Albi
This week’s words are: Feign, Gait, Torn, Press, Left, Labyrinthine (complicated, torturous, resembling a labyrinth), Look, Embed, Malformed, Gritty, Natural, Dead-reckoning (In navigation, dead reckoning is the process of calculating one’s current position by using a previously determined position, or fix, and advancing that position based upon known or estimated speeds over elapsed time and course.)
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August 14, 2017 at 3:55 pm
“She swims into the muffled silence, recalling her feats and defeats, descending to the very beginning of her life. And she surfaced proud. Today is her dead-reckoning.”
Oh my. This gave me goosies. goosies. goosies. love the enchanting feel and something creepy too!
P.S. I miiiiiiiiiiiiiiissssssss youuu! ❤ ❤ ❤
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August 14, 2017 at 4:14 pm
Thank you, dearie!! Ahahaha! I hope a little less creepy? *winks*
Miss you too! ❤ ❤ ❤
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August 14, 2017 at 4:42 pm
hehe. yes. 80% enchanting. 20% creepy. 😀
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August 14, 2017 at 5:47 pm
Haha! That’s more than fine dearie. It’s the word “dead” that’s creeping people out.
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August 14, 2017 at 10:29 pm
Yeaaaaa. That word!!! And im a scared cat. Haha
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August 14, 2017 at 3:59 pm
Lovely response and use of the words Maria.
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August 14, 2017 at 7:12 pm
Thank you, Michael! Glad you enjoyed this. 🙂
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August 14, 2017 at 5:37 pm
Oh wow. Very atmospheric and creepy!
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August 14, 2017 at 5:47 pm
Thank you, Sarah~ 🙂
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August 17, 2017 at 9:10 am
Always.
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August 14, 2017 at 9:00 pm
Another one of your excellent haibuns maria. I get a sense of a new beginning from your poem.
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August 15, 2017 at 11:52 am
Thank you, D! And so glad you’ve sense that hopeful tune in the end. It’s what I was aiming for. 😀
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August 14, 2017 at 9:40 pm
Its so enchanting….i love the goosebump feeling it gave me..
P.S i am glad to see you used your old pic..like this one..
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August 15, 2017 at 12:48 pm
Aww.. glad you liked this one 🙂
And thank you Mich! Hehe. I feel like I need to show up my face once in a while.
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August 15, 2017 at 1:30 pm
That’s right…hehehehe
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August 14, 2017 at 11:32 pm
Wow, bravo Maria! You have such a way with weaving beautiful imagery in your words ❤
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August 15, 2017 at 12:49 pm
Aw thank you, Jade. It was fun playing around with the wordle. Hope you have a lovely day, dearie. ❤
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August 15, 2017 at 2:06 am
So powerful and strong. Wonderful job with this 🙂
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August 15, 2017 at 12:50 pm
Thank you, Mandi! 😀 Happy to hear that.
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August 15, 2017 at 11:02 am
Oh my goodness, oh my goodness! Rosey has already said my exact thoughts, so I echo them–BRAVO, Maria!
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August 15, 2017 at 12:50 pm
Aww.. you two never fail to make me smile. Thank you, thank you. xoxo
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August 15, 2017 at 2:11 pm
You are SO Welcome!!! xxoo
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August 15, 2017 at 1:22 pm
There is a mood in this that I can really identify with and the imagery is great, love the way you used the words and the image
I really love the haiku at the end as well
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August 15, 2017 at 7:41 pm
Thank you, Yves. Happy to hear your thoughts. I enjoyed your prompt very much. 🙂
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August 17, 2017 at 5:12 am
I love the haiku, Maria!
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