Shadows Smile
Each night I am reminded of how long I have been walking alone. As the moon casts its light and my shadow walks with me, I count the days, the months, the years. I remember the girl who once strolled lazily with a wistful heart. I remember the girl who once walked in haste, too eager to find the comfort of her pillow. I remember the girl who once staggered, too tired with the intricacies of her world. I remember the sudden stops at the corner of 6th street to see the moon.
Now, all grown and wise, I see a woman behind the dark outline. And I see her for what she really is— a braveheart. Some would say a solitary shadow on a moonlit night is that of a sad soul. But I’d say, most often, the woman behind the shadow smiles.
A silhouette walks
And befriend the silent night—
The crescent moon smiles
© 2017 Maria. All Rights Reserved.
In response to dVerse’s Haibun Monday: The Shadow Knows
I took this photo on one of my solitary walks after work. I’ve always wondered what people see just by looking at the shadow alone. Would they see a sad soul or a happy heart? Only the shadow knows… Thanks Toni for this prompt! I’ve finally wrote something about this one.<3
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April 4, 2017 at 8:22 pm
this was just so awesome, a self-portrait with candor and beauty of spirit.
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April 5, 2017 at 8:43 am
A portrait that reflects women like us (although I still look like a girl despite my age 😅).. ❤ Thank you, Gina.
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April 5, 2017 at 8:46 am
it’s our size I suppose, I am often mistaken as the younger sister next to my towering sister who is 10 years younger than me, I am the only shorty in a family of tall people. I am sure you look sweet and lovely no matter the actual age – your reflection is your inner youth and beauty too
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April 5, 2017 at 8:51 am
Oh, how I can relate! I’m the shortest of three siblings too. To think that I’m the eldest . Aw, and thank you Gina. I always value inner beauty over physical. Although I enjoy the perks of being short. One is looking younger. 😁
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April 5, 2017 at 8:54 am
Aiya! I am the eldest and shortest too! How lovely a coincidence! Yes I like being short, there are perks only we small girls can enjoy right, wink!
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April 5, 2017 at 9:06 am
Yay! A toast that!! *winks back*
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April 4, 2017 at 9:03 pm
Excellent haibun Maria. It takes you into the DNA of the shadow.
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April 5, 2017 at 8:47 am
Yay! It was your haibuns that tempted me to write my own again. So, thank you D. 😁
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April 5, 2017 at 2:55 pm
And the inspiration is being returned with interest Maria. Your haibuns are motivating me to experiment with the form 🙂
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April 5, 2017 at 11:51 pm
Looking forward to them D ~ 😁
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April 4, 2017 at 9:40 pm
Such a wistful girl, such a brave woman. it does indeed take a brave heart that smiles to continue a walk alone. Great haibun.
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April 5, 2017 at 8:53 am
Thank you, Toni~ 😊 And yes, I completely agree..
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April 4, 2017 at 9:47 pm
The perfect prompt for this photo. You wove a beautiful story round it.
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April 5, 2017 at 8:54 am
Thank you, Jane. 😊
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April 4, 2017 at 10:38 pm
It is a wonderful piece of writing…when I look at the shadow I see a girl, I see youthful energy…but then age is all relative.
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April 5, 2017 at 8:55 am
Indeed, Paul.. 😁 Glad you liked it.
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April 4, 2017 at 11:14 pm
Maria, this is beautiful and wise. I love how you have portrayed ‘her’. Just beautiful. the haiku is lovely.
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April 5, 2017 at 8:56 am
A lot of us can relate to her, I suppose. ❤ Thank you, Jane.
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April 5, 2017 at 1:14 am
I like the idea of the moon smiling with the person projecting the shadow.
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April 5, 2017 at 8:58 am
Same here, Frank~ 🌙😊
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April 5, 2017 at 2:09 am
A stunning haibun, Maria! I loved how you transitioned from the girl to the woman in the poem. I hope the woman behind the shadow always has a reason to smile 🙂
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April 5, 2017 at 9:00 am
Me too, Jade! 😊 She’ll always have a reason to– if not for the people, for the moon. ❤
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April 6, 2017 at 8:54 am
And that’s a good a reason as any to smile 🙂
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April 5, 2017 at 12:02 pm
I love this.. so much to see in a shadow. The strength of solitude… a braveheart – wonderful haibun
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April 5, 2017 at 11:42 pm
Thank you, Bjorn ~
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April 5, 2017 at 1:25 pm
A Nice poem.
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April 5, 2017 at 2:05 pm
It takes a brave woman to smile on each night she walks alone. I hope to be like her someday. Someday. To need no one. To need no one. ❤ ❤ ❤
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April 5, 2017 at 4:50 pm
Very lovely, dear heart.
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