carrying the throes that life throws
and the weight of the wait
i long for you and my world whirled
as I whine at my wine again
a maid made of sin from sole to soul
i had no alibi
forgive me, too, if there were two
in my heart there’s only you
© 2016 Maria. All Rights Reserved.
Image Source: Favim
Written for November Notes hosted by two lovely and awesome writers, my dearie Rosema of A Reading Writer and Sarah of Heartstring Eulogies. Come, join the musical fun! 😀
Music Prompt for Day 5: Criminal by Fiona Apple
DoodleScribbles 
November 5, 2016 at 2:33 pm
Oooh, love it!
LikeLiked by 1 person
November 7, 2016 at 1:11 pm
Thank you, Sarah .. 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
November 5, 2016 at 5:36 pm
What to do in this ?
LikeLiked by 1 person
November 7, 2016 at 1:13 pm
Oh, I hope you had a better night?
LikeLiked by 1 person
November 5, 2016 at 7:08 pm
A nice take on the prompt Maria. I love the line “as I whine at my wine again.” I may try it 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
November 7, 2016 at 1:14 pm
Ha! I hope you had a good whine at your wine, D?
LikeLiked by 1 person
November 7, 2016 at 7:14 pm
Yes it was a very good Malbec thank you 🙂
LikeLike
November 5, 2016 at 9:28 pm
The play up of words is brilliant Maria..
LikeLiked by 1 person
November 7, 2016 at 1:15 pm
Thank you, Mich. It’s been a long time since I tried using homophones. ~ 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
November 5, 2016 at 10:25 pm
Fabulous word play Maria!☺
LikeLiked by 1 person
November 7, 2016 at 1:16 pm
YAY! Glad you enjoyed.. 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
November 7, 2016 at 6:30 pm
☺
LikeLike
November 5, 2016 at 10:39 pm
Wonderful poem! Great wordplay!
LikeLiked by 1 person
November 7, 2016 at 1:16 pm
Thanks, PJ 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
November 6, 2016 at 4:43 am
Hot damn! This is magical!
LikeLike
November 6, 2016 at 6:29 am
I haven’t done this one yet or heard the song. But it’s a beautiful piece. You did it well. For that’s kind where many of go when we lose someone we love. But if we had to choose we’d choose our person, not the drunken stupor we end up in. Love hurts sometimes. Great job!
LikeLike
November 6, 2016 at 12:01 pm
Oh my! I almost swayed while I read this and could just feel all the emotions that mess a person up. This is a gorgeous write ❤
LikeLike
November 6, 2016 at 12:48 pm
Very clever!
LikeLike
November 6, 2016 at 6:49 pm
as i said on IG dearie,,, this is one EPIC EPIC EPIC piece! ❤ ❤ ❤
LikeLike
November 7, 2016 at 11:02 am
Oh wow wow wow wow wow wow–there are not enough “wows”!!!
LikeLike
November 8, 2016 at 12:05 pm
I love, love, love the creative way you play with words in this poem. It’s wonderfully clever and the play on words made me smile. 🙂
LikeLike