He slammed the front door shut, leaving her a name that echoed in the four corners of the room—J O A N N A. Joanna sounded like his ‘I love you’. Joanna tasted like his kisses. Joanna felt like his touch. There were no tears in her eyes just lips closed tight. She should have known all along.
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Written for November Notes hosted by two lovely and awesome writers, my dearie Rosema of A Reading Writer and Sarah of Heartstring Eulogies. Come, join the musical fun! 😀
Music Prompt for Day 4: Between the Lines by Sara Bareilles
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November 4, 2016 at 1:51 pm
Lovely.
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November 7, 2016 at 12:25 pm
Thanks, Sarah.. 🙂
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November 4, 2016 at 3:29 pm
reading this for the 2nd time and… bes and sakeeeet pa din!!!! -_-
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November 4, 2016 at 4:06 pm
Aww, this is beautiful. (I am running out of words!)
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November 7, 2016 at 12:26 pm
Awwee.. You’ve said more than enough, dear. Thank you. ❤
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November 4, 2016 at 6:20 pm
Excellent Maria. There is a good story about to flow from this one 🙂
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November 7, 2016 at 12:34 pm
Thank you, D! I haven’t thought of that.. Hmm.. but we’ll see. 🙂
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November 4, 2016 at 6:51 pm
This was fantastic, Maria. Truly.
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November 7, 2016 at 12:44 pm
Thank you, Shaun! I appreciate it. I hope you’re having a great week
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November 4, 2016 at 7:17 pm
Yes. I vote for this.
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November 7, 2016 at 12:45 pm
Thank you. 🙂
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November 4, 2016 at 8:06 pm
Oòoooohhhhh…ahhhh
..please make a story out of this..
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November 7, 2016 at 12:46 pm
Awww I hope I can one of this days (when my muse is in a very good mood, maybe?). Thank you, Mich ~ ❤
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November 4, 2016 at 10:21 pm
wow, this piece captures the lover spurned for another. I love this series you’re doing! Each piece is so personal!
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November 7, 2016 at 12:53 pm
Thank you so much, Mel! These music prompts have their way of stirring emotions hidden within, no?
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November 8, 2016 at 11:31 am
Yes they do! You’re knocking them out of the park! I have to catch up. Work’s been keeping me up late and off WP.
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November 5, 2016 at 3:49 am
You’ve captured this piece sensationally! ❤
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November 7, 2016 at 1:00 pm
Thank you, Muse ❤
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November 8, 2016 at 3:56 am
You’re welcome, Maria! ❤
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November 5, 2016 at 12:18 pm
Brought back a painful memory–that means it’s good writing 🙂
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November 7, 2016 at 1:04 pm
Oh dear… sending you big hugs on a Monday morning, Stella. ❤
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November 7, 2016 at 2:01 pm
Thank you very much–I’ll take them ❤
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November 6, 2016 at 10:09 am
Fantastic piece. Joanna–the other woman. What a jerk!
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November 7, 2016 at 1:10 pm
I agree. It’s maddening to realize she’s been there all along. Some men, really.
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