I used to think love stories come with a soundtrack
A melody in-sync with the whistling winds
The rolling waves or the pattering raindrops
But there was no love like ours
The moon never hummed a tune as we danced
Nor the fire made a crackling sound
Instead, we shared silent exchange of hellos
Our hearts thumped like a drum that only we could hear
And the sound of the breaths we traded
As our eyes held on that tiny wisp of time
Is enough for me to believe
That some love songs are hushed.
© 2016 Maria. All Rights Reserved.
Image Source: Favim
In response to dVerse’s Tuesday Poetics: The Sound of Love
Tending the bar for Poet’s Pub today is Walt Wojtanik with his undying Whispers of Love. The challenge is to explore the sound of love. What is the timber of a kiss? What is the sound of an embrace? What cacophony resides in a broken heart? What does that voice inside your head say when you fall in love? What rumble fills your stomach when you fall out of love?
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August 17, 2016 at 1:33 pm
geeeeez. geeeeeez. this tickles the heart dearie!!! ❤ that last line is TDF! ❤
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August 17, 2016 at 7:06 pm
Awwee… I find hushed love quite tickling too, dear. Haha. ❤
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August 18, 2016 at 10:10 am
yeah! it is! 😀 😀 😀
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August 17, 2016 at 2:45 pm
Aww yes.
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August 18, 2016 at 1:59 pm
Thank you, Sarah~ ^^
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August 18, 2016 at 2:07 pm
Of course! 😊
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August 17, 2016 at 3:41 pm
There was no kind of love like ours ❤. I wish to tell this to someone, if only there is. Another lovely poem of yours.
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August 17, 2016 at 7:11 pm
Awwee… don’t worry. You’re not along in that area. We’ll find those kind of love in time. 😉 Thank you, Lai.
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August 17, 2016 at 7:33 pm
Oh, hahaha I’m not alone 😁😀😃
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August 17, 2016 at 6:16 pm
I think that hush and drums is very real… more a shaman’s drum than symphonies… love the sentiment.
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August 18, 2016 at 1:59 pm
Ooh… shaman’s drum! I love that. ❤ Thank you, Bjorn~
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August 17, 2016 at 7:01 pm
Quiet, intimate moments, especially with nature are important in a relationship…nice.
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August 19, 2016 at 10:19 am
Thank you, Kathy! That is also true..~
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August 17, 2016 at 11:23 pm
A quiet love, a hushed love. What a beautiful love for indeed, they are not all loud symphonies or rocking guitars.
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August 19, 2016 at 10:20 am
Indeed. And that even in silence, we could still hear the sound of love. ❤
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August 21, 2016 at 4:57 am
❤
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August 18, 2016 at 12:48 am
A quiet.. almost telepathic connection with another soul… sigh.. incredible write. ❤
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August 19, 2016 at 10:21 am
Thank you, Sanaa. 🙂
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August 18, 2016 at 2:47 am
Wonderful!
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August 19, 2016 at 10:21 am
Thanks a lot, PJ. Have a lovely day. 🙂
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August 18, 2016 at 5:47 am
So
true..
Love aT
First siGht
would bE
impossible by a SonG..
alonE noW..
LoveS eYes
fLy hiGher
allone..
than
even
MuSic SinGS..:)
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August 19, 2016 at 10:21 am
Awwee.. thank you, katie. 🙂
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August 19, 2016 at 10:25 am
Welcome
FriEnd..:)
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August 18, 2016 at 6:02 am
Liking that hushed breath and quiet time…Enjoyed this one Maria.
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August 19, 2016 at 10:22 am
Happy to hear that, Grace. Thank you. 🙂
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August 18, 2016 at 6:05 am
I really like this. I like the different take on the “sound” of love.
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August 19, 2016 at 10:22 am
Thank you, Maria. Glad you enjoyed this one. 🙂
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August 18, 2016 at 6:29 am
So true. I love the sound and silence in this, inner sound I think. Well done!
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August 19, 2016 at 10:23 am
Inner sound, indeed. Thank you, Dr. Crystal .”)
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August 18, 2016 at 8:21 pm
Agreed! Some love songs are private renditions, meant only for our ears. That’s not to say they carry less gravity. Two hearts will recognize its import and cherish it greatly. A lovely poem to the extreme, Maria!
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August 19, 2016 at 10:24 am
Awwee.. thank you, Walt! And thank you for the prompt, I’ve enjoyed listening to the different sounds of love this week. ❤
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August 21, 2016 at 1:51 am
Beautiful Maria. “That some love songs are hushed” love that line, it’s powerful. Two songs came to mind “Our Song,” by Taylor Swift, made me think, every love song with every lover is different as yours is silent. And the fact your song is “silence” made me think of the “Sound of Silence” by Simon and Garfunkel, redone recently, by Disturbed. In he song there are people talking and singing without talking or singing, and all that remains is the sound of silence, an oxymoron I think. Great writing.
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August 22, 2016 at 11:14 pm
Lovely poem, Maria! It’s so sweet and romantic. A unique love. ❤
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September 9, 2016 at 7:38 pm
I love this sentiment, what a lovely expression. Love is hushed. I think maybe long love is both hushed and drums, and everything in between at some point. If we’re lucky.💜
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September 10, 2016 at 12:08 pm
Hushed and drums.. Awwee I love that. ❤️ I think most of us are lucky to have both. Thank you, Kay. 😘
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September 10, 2016 at 9:31 pm
I love that!
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September 12, 2016 at 7:31 pm
This is beautiful. Back when I was a touring musician (singer/ songwriter in a few bands and acts) I wrote these lyrics:
‘And with silence in the air, love will sing’
Thought you poem captured the very same sentiment.
Good work.
Eli
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September 12, 2016 at 8:42 pm
A painter, a writer and a musician. That’s quite a talent. 👏 Thanks for the kind words Eli and I love your lyrics. Sounds like a great song as a whole. Do you still perform and write songs?
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September 13, 2016 at 7:17 am
That’s very kind. I’m just a very creative person. I still write songs with my producer but don’t your anymore. Here’s a song I wrote that I think you will like 🙂
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September 13, 2016 at 3:26 pm
That’s a charming song! Something I’d love to hear on a lazy afternoon. 🙂 You should continue writing and share them here in blogoshphere, Eli.
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September 13, 2016 at 7:06 pm
I haven’t even thought of that.. But I might just 🙂 it’s my 300th post soon. Maybe I’ll do a little musical post.. Eli
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September 14, 2016 at 3:03 pm
Six more to go! Looking forward to it. 😉
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September 14, 2016 at 7:08 pm
Haha 😉 let’s see eh!
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