A huge crowd gathered across the strange-looking building in 12th street. It’s only six o’clock in the morning yet the street was already swarming with people. He could hear consecutive gasps, curses and laughter as he towered behind the onlookers and eavesdroppers.
“Who would do such thing to Madame Tesdale’s teahouse?”
“Genius—whoever those people are!”
“Did she ran out of tea and decided to sell booze instead?”
“Hello Kitty goes Funky Munky, huh?”
“FUNKY MUNKY, that’s a helluva name. Isn’t that supposed to be Funky Monkey?”
Still smiling from ear to ear, his eyes caught a glimpse of the teahouse owner. There goes poor Madame Tesdale who looked like she just raided her daughter’s closet with her pink dress, platform heels, plastic bangles and banana clips. The look on her face as she saw the once cutesy teahouse turned into a funky-looking bar was priceless. She then collapsed.
Unable to contain his amusement, he let out a laugh.
“Hey… You’re the new guy, right?” a neighbor asked. “Is that paint on your face?”
© 2016 Maria. All Rights Reserved.
Here is for Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers prompt. This week’s photo prompt is provided by TJ Paris. Thanks PJ for hosting another fun prompt.
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August 17, 2016 at 12:08 am
Hahahaha poor Madame Tesdale, but I have to admit, this is quite the prank. There can never be too many funky bars, am I right 😉
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August 17, 2016 at 1:37 pm
Haha! No- definitely no. I did feel bad for doing such thing to Madame Tesdale’s teahouse. I’m such a fan of cutesy tea houses and coffee shops. ❤
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August 17, 2016 at 9:59 pm
I am too! There’s a Wonderland-themed tea house (from Alice in Wonderland) here in NYC that has been on my list of places to try; it’s so cute and fancy!
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August 18, 2016 at 1:46 pm
Ooh… Alice in Wonderland!! I hope they have a rabbit hole. ❤
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August 17, 2016 at 12:22 am
Hahahaha! Cute story! Poor Madame Tesdale! She had the shock of her life!
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August 17, 2016 at 1:55 pm
Hahaha! That’s for sure. 😀 Thanks for the prompt this week, PJ!
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August 17, 2016 at 7:58 pm
My pleasure Maria!
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August 17, 2016 at 12:34 am
Great story, I feel for Madame Tesdale – maybe she would still enjoy it even though it was a funky bar now?!
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August 17, 2016 at 2:55 pm
Men surely do love it this way. Haha. She’ll get by, for sure. 🙂
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August 17, 2016 at 1:25 am
Oh, nice!
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August 17, 2016 at 6:53 pm
Thank you, Sarah~ ❤
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August 18, 2016 at 3:33 am
Of course!
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August 17, 2016 at 1:37 am
Oh he is in so much trouble.
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August 17, 2016 at 2:56 pm
Maybe? Maybe not? *plays suspense music*
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August 17, 2016 at 5:43 am
Creative and unique. I love it.
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August 17, 2016 at 6:56 pm
Thank you, Lai! 😀
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August 17, 2016 at 7:32 pm
Your most welcome 😁
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August 17, 2016 at 6:05 am
Hehe. Great take. I can imagine the poor Madame all decked out and fainting lol.
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August 17, 2016 at 6:57 pm
Hahaha… poor madame! Thank you, Mandi. 🙂
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August 17, 2016 at 9:58 am
oh this is so adorable, Maria! Poor Madame. I hope she’d be happy eventually! 😀
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August 17, 2016 at 7:04 pm
I hope so, too. Or perhaps, she’d change her line of business to suit the style?
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August 17, 2016 at 3:36 pm
That’s quite the practical joke :-). I hope poor Madame Tesdale recovers!
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August 17, 2016 at 7:09 pm
I smell a new line of business brewing… 😀
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August 17, 2016 at 8:14 pm
Hahahaha! What a prank! Poor Madame Tesdale though.
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August 18, 2016 at 1:46 pm
I feel bad for her, too.. Hehe
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August 18, 2016 at 2:59 am
Pranks can be very harmful, but even though Madame Tesdale had the shock of her life, perhaps it was a sign that she needs to change things a bit and her business will really become huge! If she thinks she has a lemon…she needs to take a closer look and see that it is really lemonade and in great demand! Wonderful story, Maria.
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August 18, 2016 at 1:50 pm
Yes, yes! Thanks for the insightful comments, Jessie. I believe she’ll come to realize she could turn the situation upside-down. 🙂
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August 19, 2016 at 10:10 pm
the paint on his face, that gave him up! excellent flash fiction with a whopper end!….Gina
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September 3, 2016 at 4:01 am
Love the look of it. So daring! 🙂
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