I spent my waking days sowing seeds of hopes and dreams on the face of the earth, wishing that they may land on a good soil. There were days when the seeds scattered on a cold, hard path where ravenous birds await. Those seeds didn’t even get the chance to grow their roots as they were mercilessly devoured. There were days when the seeds fell on shallow grounds surrounded by rocks. Most of them grew but never lasted. Some sprang out quickly but the rocks kept getting in the way while others were withered by the scorching sun and wilted craving for the rain. There were days when I found them amidst the weeds and thorns. The weeds tried to take away what little the seeds have—the sunlight, the water, the nutrients—while the thorns pierced them every time they try to grow. My tears smeared the earth on these days. In the cradle of the night, I held the last seeds close to my heart now wrapped with mudcracks, and prayed to the moon and stars for the courage to sow them again. “Patience, little girl,” the night sky whispered. So I tossed the seeds once again with a hopeful heart. I called upon the wind to blow them to a fertile soil where hopes and dreams may sprout— where tears and sweat come to fruition. Let’s see this parable come to life.
Lift your hands above
Feel your freedom like a dove
He’ll guide your plans, love
© 2016 Maria. All Rights Reserved.
Photography by Jenna Walker
In response to dVerse’s MtB: Let’s Kick it Up a Notch
Tending the bar today is Victoria with her piece, Death, Imagined. The challenge is to search your archives and choose a poem, even if it’s one you thought was already done, and see if you can add a little spice to it through the use of sensory description, replacing metaphor, or tightening up your word count.
This was originally a haiku I wrote last March entitled, Plans. I added little something with the help of Chèvrefeuille’s Haibun Prompt (which reminded me of patience) and Raja’s Inspiration Call (which reminded me of Matthew 13 – The Parable of the Sower).
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August 5, 2016 at 4:41 pm
the journey was beautifully, vividly told in the first part. then the last three lines makes the journey worthwhile. Lovely, dear Maria! Just great! ❤
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August 5, 2016 at 10:23 pm
Thank you, dearie. I feel that we’ve all been in this kind of journey. ☺️
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August 5, 2016 at 5:24 pm
Very Biblical 🙂 Lovely!
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August 5, 2016 at 10:24 pm
Thank you, Ali. This one’s one of my favorite parables. 😊
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August 5, 2016 at 6:21 pm
Awww beautiful!
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August 5, 2016 at 10:25 pm
Thank you, Sarah… 😊 Happy weekend!
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August 6, 2016 at 1:30 am
You as well! 😊
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August 5, 2016 at 6:31 pm
wow…this is so beautiful…turning a lone haiku into a Haibun, great job…
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August 5, 2016 at 10:27 pm
Aww.. Thank you, Sumana. It was all thanks to the surge of inspiration today. 😊 Enjoy the weekend!
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August 5, 2016 at 7:09 pm
A lovely piece Maria.
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August 5, 2016 at 10:29 pm
Thank you, D. It’s a great compliment coming from you. ☺️
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August 5, 2016 at 8:37 pm
Great expansion of your original thought, Maria!
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August 5, 2016 at 10:31 pm
Thank you, Walt! I have to thank Victoria for pushing us to our limits this time. 😁
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August 5, 2016 at 8:49 pm
The senryu you based this on is so full of gentle spirit. The haibun is a lovely enrichment of it and shows the letting go and giving it to the Spirit
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August 5, 2016 at 10:37 pm
A very apt interpretation. Thank you, Toni.☺️ Happy to know I did justice to this haibun.
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August 9, 2016 at 1:05 am
You did!
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August 5, 2016 at 9:54 pm
A lovely take on the parable… and a lovely reminder indeed! 🙂 Glad you touched upon this! Inspiring!
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August 5, 2016 at 10:46 pm
Thank you, Dee. The parable came first to mind. It feels good to write something very close to the heart. ☺️
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August 5, 2016 at 10:47 pm
Maria, this is wonderful!
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August 9, 2016 at 12:22 pm
Thank you, PJ. Glad you enjoyed it. 🙂 ❤
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August 6, 2016 at 2:01 am
Maria, I, too, love the biblical references, here. The haiku on its own is lovely but adding the so-poetic prose in making it a haibun. Wow. You inspire me to look at the ton of haiku I have in my edit file and do something just like you have done. Thank you so very much.
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August 9, 2016 at 12:24 pm
Awwee… Thank you so much for the kind words, Victoria. It was all thanks to your prompt that we all get to stretch out imagination and flex our poetic fingers. So, thank you. 🙂 ❤ I'm looking forward to those re-write. I'm sure you'll write splendidly as you already are.
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August 6, 2016 at 6:53 am
A beautifully well written piece. Yes, ” let his parable come to life.”
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August 9, 2016 at 12:25 pm
Thank you, Jessie. 🙂 Have a blessed day .
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August 6, 2016 at 8:27 am
Wonderful! The prose-poetry added so much, was an enchantment in itself, and the haiku now rounds it off beautifully.
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August 9, 2016 at 12:26 pm
Thank you so much, Rosemary. Happy to know you enjoyed this one. 🙂
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August 6, 2016 at 10:38 am
Oh my my my, I LOVE this. Love the visual of “tossing seeds”, and the sound of the night sky whispering… 🙂
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August 9, 2016 at 12:27 pm
Awwee… thank you, Stella! ❤
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August 6, 2016 at 12:11 pm
Beautiful!
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August 9, 2016 at 12:27 pm
Thank you, Gilda! Have a lovely week. 🙂
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August 9, 2016 at 7:51 pm
Thanks, you too Maria!😊
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