Kicking Butts
Realistic Fiction
“Hey, Chev!” Dorothy called out to the 1967 Chevrolet Impala. “Going out with that horse? It’s not my favorite pair but suit yourself.”
Ace snorted loudly as he eyed the white Cadillac beside them. “Is this the one, Chevy?”
Chevy has seen Dorothy the day Marcus, her owner, received that dreadful foreclosure notice. Marcus lost his home to the bank, concurrently, losing his whole life, too. She hated Dorothy and the bank since then.
“You’re looking rather sleek today.” Ace walked towards Dorothy, appraising her body. “A Cadillac Escalade?”
“2016. The latest model.” Dorothy grinned with pride.
“I see… So your owner came here to take the Marcus’ ranch. Four decades— the man has been working up a sweat living his own life.”
Dorothy noticed anger in Ace’s voice and refuted, “He’s just doing his job. He didn’t—
A loud smashing sound left Dorothy startled. The last thing she remembered was the sight of her shattered headlights and damaged wing before Ace gave one last angry jolt, “Tell that professional crook I’ll kick his capitalist butt.”
Word Count: 175
© 2016 Maria. All Rights Reserved.
Here is for Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers prompt. This week’s photo prompt is provided by Phylor. Thanks PJ for hosting another fun prompt.
P.S. I missed this!! ❤
This one is inspired by a documentary I was watching last night. Michael Moore’s Capitalism: A love story.
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August 2, 2016 at 12:57 pm
What is that documentary sal? can you send me a copy? XD
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August 2, 2016 at 1:03 pm
It’s on Youtube, fat. The link is below. 😉
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August 2, 2016 at 1:06 pm
ahy.. can’t watch youtube it is banned hehehehe XD anywa, next time.. 🙂
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August 2, 2016 at 1:07 pm
Ah, that’s why! I’ll send you the link in FB so you could look it up later.
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August 2, 2016 at 1:13 pm
Okidoki! XD
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August 2, 2016 at 3:45 pm
Sweet revenge with car on car violence – a stunningly original take on the prompt! Watch out for those Chevys! Great to see what others write and I would never have thought of this, so really interesting. 🙂
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August 3, 2016 at 1:42 pm
Hello Lynn! Thank you. Happy to know you enjoyed this one. Indeed, it is great to see what others write and how we all could come up with different stories out of a single picture. 😉
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August 3, 2016 at 4:30 pm
Yes, very true. And a pleasure to read 🙂
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August 2, 2016 at 5:59 pm
I’m thinking the owner of the Cadilac foreclosed on the Marcus Property and revenge was in order! I liked the ending! Great story!
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August 3, 2016 at 1:46 pm
Most definitely! But I do hope Marcus won’t get more trouble when the Cadilac owner finds out what happened to his car. XD Thank you, PJ!
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August 3, 2016 at 3:00 am
Nice one. Great write Maria!
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August 3, 2016 at 1:59 pm
Thank you, Mandi! 🙂
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August 3, 2016 at 3:09 am
Nice take on the prompt. Very creative. 😊
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August 3, 2016 at 1:59 pm
Thanks, Jessie! 🙂
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August 3, 2016 at 4:03 am
I read “1967 Chevrolet Impala” and my mind immediately thought “SUPERNATURAL”. I apologize if you’re not a fan of the show xD
Personally, I’d prefer the Chevy to the Cadillac 😉 This was super original and such a neat twist on the photo prompt, Maria!
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August 3, 2016 at 3:14 pm
Ooh, I haven’t watched that one. And I still have your Criminal Minds on my to-watch list! XD I don’t have a car but I’d choose Chevy if I ever get the chance, too. Thank you, Jade! ^^
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August 3, 2016 at 11:32 pm
Haha no rush! Idk if Supernatural is your kinda show, but in a nutshell, it’s about two brothers who fight monsters and demons and other supernatural things, regularly saving the world from apocalypses haha ❤
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August 4, 2016 at 11:57 am
As long as there are not ghosts, Jade. I’d be up to it! Hahaha
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August 8, 2016 at 11:14 pm
Ahh…they do have some episodes where they go ghost-hunting lol
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August 3, 2016 at 10:54 am
BAM! What a fierce ending, MAria! Love how unique your take is!
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August 3, 2016 at 3:44 pm
Thanks, deariee! I just had to end it with a kick! XD
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August 3, 2016 at 3:48 pm
that was literally a KICK, dearie!!! 😀
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August 4, 2016 at 11:38 am
Hahaha. Yeah! XD
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August 3, 2016 at 7:33 pm
Yet another entertaining, unique, and fierce take of the prompt. Revenge is temporarily sweet, but I sense more damage in the future for everyone. (Eek!) Great job with this!
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August 4, 2016 at 11:47 am
Eek!! Haha! Yes, I fear about that, too. BUT for the meantime, let’s enjoy this sweet revenge while the Cadillac owner’s gone.
Thank you, Izzy! And it’s a delight to get to know you here. 😉
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August 5, 2016 at 8:21 am
Same here, fellow writer. And yep, lol, seems better to enjoy that for as long as possible.
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August 8, 2016 at 7:46 pm
Oh my word! We seem to have the same story thought with this photo prompt. Wonderful 😄
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