She craved to write something beautiful
Like how the night sky stretched endlessly
A dark veil that hung overhead—
Unmoving and still
Like how the stars that flickered up above
Reminded her of home, of dreams, and of unicorns
That each glimmer was a tinge of hope—
A touch of a whimsical dream
Like how the moon, full in its glory,
Brought light to her darkest corners
Reminding that she is never alone—
That it is ready to listen
But as her eyes closed in the cradle of the crisp air
She found beauty in a pair of eyes
So dark that the night sky cowered
Its iridescence made the flickering stars shy away
That the moon, even in its full glory,
Winced to the radiant glow of those eyes
She craved to write something beautiful
Something about the night, the moon, and the stars
But, instead, she found herself writing
About a pair of dark eyes.
© 2016 Maria. All Rights Reserved.
Artwork by Paul Pond
Today’s Filipino word prompt is “paraluman” which refers to “a muse that inspires artistically”.
P.S. This was an unpublished poem I wrote last May. I have been out of the blogosphere for three days now. Work happens. 😦 My apologies for the posts that I have missed and comments that I have not answered to. I will catch up on reading your posts the soonest!
Hugs and kisses! -Maria.
Come on!
Write a poem or a fiction
Snap a photo under the sun
A six-word tale or a long post, perhaps?
Let’s all get word-high this July!
Want to join the fun? Find the prompt words HERE! Don’t forget to pingback & use the tag WordHighJuly. Mazel tov! 😉
July 18, 2016 at 10:41 pm
This was truly beautiful Maria.
And it’s great to have you back on the blogosphere!
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July 19, 2016 at 12:28 pm
Happy to hear that. Thank you, Shaun. 🙂
It is good to be back. I hope work doesn’t try it’s hard to pull me away from here.
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July 19, 2016 at 4:45 pm
We just have to fight work with our creativity 😀
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July 19, 2016 at 10:17 pm
A big YES to that! ✌🏿️✌🏿✌🏿
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July 18, 2016 at 11:32 pm
Lovely! 😊
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July 19, 2016 at 12:28 pm
Thank you, S! ❤
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July 19, 2016 at 12:34 am
lovely pair of dark eyes, Maria 🙂
https://ladyleemanila.wordpress.com/2016/07/17/word-high-july-aking-paraluman/
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July 19, 2016 at 12:29 pm
Yes, indeed. Thank you, Ladylee. 😀
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July 19, 2016 at 3:49 am
Simply beautiful! I love this take.
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July 19, 2016 at 5:13 am
Extremely wonderfully written, no matter when you wrote it. I love the descriptions of the night sky and how despite its cosmic beauty, an even darker pair of eyes draws her attention more and begs her to write of them. Great write.
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July 19, 2016 at 12:30 pm
Thank you so much, Mandi. You summarized it beautifully. ❤
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July 19, 2016 at 7:58 am
You have incredible talent! So many great phrases–my fave today is, “the night sky cowered”…WOW WOW WOW.
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July 19, 2016 at 12:32 pm
Wow, wow.. thank you soooooo much dearest Stella! Glad you enjoyed it as much as I do.
Sending smiles your way today. Have a lovely day. ❤ 🙂
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July 19, 2016 at 1:48 pm
You’re more than welcome, always–you have a lovely day too ❤
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July 19, 2016 at 10:15 pm
Hugs and kisses!! 😘☺️
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July 20, 2016 at 6:29 am
And to you as well ❤
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July 19, 2016 at 10:36 am
Your words are beautiful and captivating!
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July 19, 2016 at 12:32 pm
Thanks a lot, Josslyn. Glad I had this poem in my drafts. ❤
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July 19, 2016 at 12:56 pm
You’re welcome! 🙂
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July 19, 2016 at 10:38 am
So, so beautiful! Thanks for sharing this!
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July 19, 2016 at 12:33 pm
And thank you for reading it. ❤ Have a blessed day, Gilda.
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July 19, 2016 at 6:35 pm
My pleasure!
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July 19, 2016 at 10:21 pm
❤️❤️❤️
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July 19, 2016 at 1:38 pm
oh my dear Maria!!!! THis is BEYOND BEAUTIFUL! I can somehow sense that there is a real person behind those dark eyes because this felt so real, so raw. ❤
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July 19, 2016 at 10:14 pm
Yes! Haha. I wrote this when I had one of those kilig moments with crush at work. 😍
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July 19, 2016 at 11:42 pm
Hahaha. Kaya pala inspired.
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July 19, 2016 at 10:36 pm
wow, this poem and the one for habilin seem like two parts of a sublime whole. Here in this poem we have the meeting with the one spoken to in the habilin poem. Beautiful lines my friend!
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July 21, 2016 at 5:53 pm
Oh wow, I didn’t think of that! Reading back, it really does sounds like two parts of a poem. Keen eyes, Mel! And thank you for reading between the lines. ❤❤❤
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July 21, 2016 at 11:18 pm
You’re welcome 🙂 I live between the lines 🙂
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July 21, 2016 at 3:51 am
Both beautiful and mysterious! Love it!
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July 21, 2016 at 5:53 pm
Thank you PJ! I wish you a lovely day… ❤❤❤
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July 21, 2016 at 7:32 pm
Thank you and I wish you a lovely day too!
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