First Dance
A Mythic Fiction
Cybele, the goddess of nature, came in the earliest crack of dawn. Soft gust of wind kissed on her cheeks, flirted with her long drape, and tousled her golden curls.
“Oh! Good morning, Boreas! You’re awfully playful today.” She said in between chuckle, whisking the wind away.
“All for you, Cybele,” Boreas, the god of wind, replied and with all the pride and air he could muster, gave a ceremonial bow, “May I have the honor to be your first dance?”
“You’ve always knew for whom my first dance is,” she softly whispered. With that, Cybele started moving slowly, her long dress flew gracefully with every bend and every curve as she performed her morning mantra.
Flourish my children, spread your verdant greens
Bloom, oh sweet buds, show those smiles to me
Creatures in the wild, live and run freely
Breath with pride my mountains and rivers in between
With one final pose, she pointed her toes and lifted her foot to an arabesque.
“What a pleasure it is,” Boreas exclaimed, “to hear your prayers, dear Cybele. You are as refined as a queen and as graceful as a swan.”
“Thank you, Boreas! But you still won’t get your dance.”
Word Count: 200
© 2016 Maria. All Rights Reserved.
Written for Sunday Photo Fiction’s prompt.
Sunday Photo Fiction is a weekly writing challenge hosted by Alastair Forbes where a photo is used as a prompt for a piece of fiction using around 200 words. The piece doesn’t have to center around exactly what the photo is, it can be just used as a basis for a story. Thank you, Al!
*Cybele is known as the mistress of wild nature and goddess of fertility. She personified the earth and its abundant benefits, and was regarded as the Great Mother and unceasing producer of all plant life. She was also believed to exercise unbounded sway over the animal world including wild animals, especially the lion.
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June 7, 2016 at 2:00 pm
uhhuuuuuuh! this is just so enchanting my dear! love the internal rhyming and the beat! and that last line gave me that: ‘uhuuuuh’. ❤
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June 7, 2016 at 3:58 pm
Thank you, Rosema. I love your ‘uhuuuuh’ at the end! Hahaha. Made me ‘uhuuuuh’, too! ❤ 😉
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June 7, 2016 at 4:06 pm
hahah! that’s too cute to read, dearie!!! 😀 😀 😀
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June 7, 2016 at 4:14 pm
You’re cuteness overload my dear Rosema!! ^^
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June 7, 2016 at 4:17 pm
Yay! thank youuuuu! my chubby cheeks are cute, i agree. haha
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June 7, 2016 at 4:23 pm
Hahaha! Those chubby cheeks and you. :3
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June 7, 2016 at 4:42 pm
yeah! haha. glad you don’t have them. haha
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June 7, 2016 at 5:09 pm
Haha.. I wish I have them– just a little! XD
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June 7, 2016 at 5:09 pm
haha. if only i can donate some! 😉
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June 7, 2016 at 5:17 pm
HAHA! If only….
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June 7, 2016 at 5:21 pm
yeah! 😀 😀 😀
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June 7, 2016 at 2:53 pm
That silver-tongued Boreas. It’s not getting him anywhere, though! Lovely piece.
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June 8, 2016 at 6:54 pm
Definitely not going anywhere with his air! Haha. Thanks, Ali. 😀
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June 7, 2016 at 5:40 pm
Whoa! Flirty thing, that Boreas 😀 But, poor thing! Didn’t get his dance in the end, did he? 🙂
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June 8, 2016 at 3:47 pm
Ha! Sadly his “charm” didn’t work. 😀 Thanks for dropping by, NJ. ^^
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June 7, 2016 at 11:24 pm
Aww, nature dancing with the wind. What a lovely thought. I think Boreas should keep trying! 🙂
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June 8, 2016 at 6:57 pm
Ooooh! You’re the first one to cheer for Boreas, PJ! Haha. I guess he needs to do a looot more flirting to get his dance. XD
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June 8, 2016 at 8:32 pm
I liked the romantic part of nature and wind dancing! Boreas should get his dance! LOL!
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June 8, 2016 at 11:09 am
Thank you for a lovely read
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June 8, 2016 at 7:00 pm
And to you dear Dahlia, for dropping by. 🙂
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June 8, 2016 at 8:52 pm
🙂
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June 8, 2016 at 12:17 pm
Oh my! This story is romantic and sweet and flirty and enchanting all at once! Lovely job, Maria.
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June 8, 2016 at 7:22 pm
Awweeee! I love your adjective overflow, Jade! Thanks you so much. ❤ ^^
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June 9, 2016 at 7:45 pm
I got lost in this in a good way – the flow and rhythm were amazing. Birds chirping outside my window this morning may have helped, too. 🙂
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June 10, 2016 at 9:55 am
Awwee I’m sure those little chirping birds helped a lot! Cybele may have sent them on your window. ^^ Thank you, Jesse!
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June 13, 2016 at 2:29 pm
I really love this. Cybele makes me think of Alanis Morissette’s portrayal of God in Dogma.
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June 18, 2016 at 3:24 am
Beautiful.
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June 18, 2016 at 10:02 am
Thank you, Andrew! 😊
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