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When I see you I’m speechless but my heart is yelling,
When I’m with you I’m smiling but my hands are trembling,
When you talk I listen but all I care is to see your face,
You brighten my day like the sun’s radiant rays.
Would you believe me if I say it’s true?
That when you’re around every gray turns to blue,
You’re my Patronus, when darkness comes
Single-handedly beating my fears and frowns.
Every sight of you and her is a dart to these eyes.
It’s mind-wrecking, to my heart a scythe.
Why can’t you see that you are for me?
That she’s a fantasy while I’m your reality.
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April 18, 2016 at 3:53 pm
GEEZZ!!! That last line!!! Argh! Really, Maria!!! Hugot na hugot tayo today!
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April 18, 2016 at 7:37 pm
GEEZ!! Hahaha. I’ve noticed, too!! I didn’t mean to be a hugot queen today though. I scheduled this before April, I didn’t know it’s such a hugot. XD
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April 18, 2016 at 5:14 pm
Haha! I agree with Rose! GEEZ!!! I’m reading it and going ‘aww’ and then on the last line, it’s ‘whoa’!!
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April 18, 2016 at 7:40 pm
Uh-uh! Now I’m nervous with your reactions. Haha! Thank you NJ. ^^
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April 18, 2016 at 5:47 pm
Thats a new word in my dictionary and totally makes sense!!!
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April 18, 2016 at 9:52 pm
You’re my Patronus, when darkness comes ~> HARRY POTTER REFERENCE made me squeal *-*, heartbreaking but sweet poem Maria!
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April 19, 2016 at 12:30 pm
Haha! One of the potterheads here, too!!
Thank you, Jade. ^^
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April 20, 2016 at 2:25 am
Yes indeed, I am a huuuuge Potterhead ❤ Always appreciate HP references! 😀
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April 18, 2016 at 10:58 pm
Haha, that word describes me sometimes. 😀
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April 19, 2016 at 8:37 am
Like this. Love the use of patronus, that’s a powerful thing to be for someone – a defender and light agains darkness. Plus, I love HP. And I like your end line, saying she is the one in “fantasy” stuck in “oneiratexia” you are reality (your main character) but this guy just doesn’t see you. That would be frustrating, maybe he doesn’t know the difference btw fantasy and reality either? Or maybe he isn’t worth defending? Just thoughts. Lovely job Maria!
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April 19, 2016 at 12:38 pm
Ooh… I love HP too! XD And this comment, “Or maybe he isn’t worth defending?” ~this! Yes, maybe he is Mandi. You interpreted this very well. Thank you. 🙂
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April 19, 2016 at 10:00 am
I think a lot of writers suffer from this.
Beautiful poem.
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April 19, 2016 at 12:43 pm
True… 🙂 Thanks Elizabeth.
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April 25, 2016 at 12:40 pm
There’s certainly a great deal to know about this subject.
I love all of the points you have made.
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April 27, 2016 at 9:46 am
I love your poem, it’s beautiful! I completely understand those feelings, and your writing describes how I feel quite a bit at times. Keep up your great work!
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