You left me a crime scene
Down in the basements, dark,
Etching ground, bloodlike,
Severed arm, severed leg,
Blood; instant death.
They call it paranoia— delusional thinking
When I saw men as mere murderers
Bloodhounds, arsonists, actors
Disguised in painted letters and poetry
Secret rooms and music halls.
Look into the eyes of dead people
Trace the fingerprints
Smell the nauseating blood
Tell me, are these mistakes made by
A mere impotent fury?
Day 12: Today, I challenge you to write your own index poem. You could start with found language from an actual index, or you could invent an index, somewhat in the style of this poem by Thomas Brendler. Happy writing!
P.S. I took the highlighted words from the index of Patricia Cornwell’s Jack the Ripper book. I’ve had this book since March 2016 but I haven’t got the chance to read it yet (Arghh! Work.). Did this poem make enough sense? Ha! It sounds sinister to me. 😀
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April 12, 2016 at 11:27 pm
Whoa Maria! Chilling poem! I loved the perspective of it. The detective trying to make sense of the killer’s twisted mind? The way you described the scene, the emotions, everything just made me feel like I was there at the crime myself. You did such an amazing job!
Oh and yes, your poem made a lot of sense 😉
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April 13, 2016 at 12:56 pm
YAY! Glad it turned out well. 😀 The book does looked like it’s packed with gruesome scenes and thrilling detective chases. Arghh! Need to tick it off my reading list one of these days!! Thank you so much, Jade!! ❤
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April 13, 2016 at 11:34 pm
Let me know if you recommend the book after you finally read it! I love detective novels and crime fiction. 🙂
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April 14, 2016 at 10:49 am
Will do! I love those genres, too. 😀
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April 13, 2016 at 2:37 am
Great job Maria. I agree with Jadem — chilling poem!
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April 13, 2016 at 1:03 pm
YAY! Thank you, Mandi! 😀
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April 13, 2016 at 3:06 am
Very chilling! But very good!
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April 13, 2016 at 11:43 am
Thank you, PJ! 🙂 🙂
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April 13, 2016 at 6:05 am
It sure does make sense! Nicely done.
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April 13, 2016 at 5:52 pm
Thank you so much, Linda! Have a great day! “)
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April 13, 2016 at 7:07 am
Quite an eerie story! So descriptive and sounds so real. Great job. 😋
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April 13, 2016 at 5:55 pm
Credits to Patricia Cornwell’s book, it’s filled with gruesome imagery. Thank you, Jessie! 😀
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April 13, 2016 at 5:16 pm
It makes sense. Definitely. But oh my! Is it spooky! 😀 Sends shiver down my spine.
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April 14, 2016 at 10:35 am
I hope it didn’t get too cold!? Haha. Happy to hear that from you dearie. :*
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April 14, 2016 at 4:45 pm
Haha! No. I’m a fan of mysteries (any kind) so it just reminds of them 😀
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April 15, 2016 at 12:31 pm
YAY! Same here! 😀 Any author you fancy that I may like?
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April 15, 2016 at 5:02 pm
Oh dear! There are so many that I read. Here’s a few:-
Agatha Christie
James Patterson
Chris Kuzneski
Dick Francis
Lawrence Sanders
Steve Martini
Kathy Reichs
Satyajit Ray
P.D. James
Jo Nesbo
Gillian Flynn
Neil Gaiman
Gerald Durrell
…. the list goes on 😀
P.S. Have you read any of them? Any suggestions for me? 🙂
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April 18, 2016 at 7:05 pm
YAY! Too many! I have to take note of these authors. XD Hmm.. I’ve only read James Patterson’s and Gillian Flynn’s from your list. Have you read Flynn’s Dark Places? Not the most likable characters but the story is quite disturbing. XD
Hmm.. as for me, my favorites would be Montanari and Patricia Cornwell. 🙂
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