It was Sunday afternoon when Kyle gave in to his daughter’s insistent demand. Kristel, his fair-skinned, auburn-haired, ball of cuteness eight years old, had been babbling about a place ever since she watched Finding Nemo.
“P Sherman, 42 Wallaby Way, Sydney! P Sherman, 42 Wallaby Way, Sydney! P Sherman, 42 Wallaby Way, Sydney!” she chanted from the backseat.
“Yes, sweetheart. Almost there.” Kyle smiled through the rear-view mirror.
“Just keep swimming, Daddy!” Her round eyes widened in excitement, her little teeth as white as pearl in full show. She’s a splitting image of his wife, Lyla. If only you were here, my love, he thought.
Minutes later, they pulled up near the harbor. Seagulls hovered in the sky, gliding with the sea breeze. Kyle looked around and found the dentist’s office. “Come on, sweetheart. There’s Mr. Sherman.”
Kristel dashed to the glass door, slid it open without a word. Inside was a stunned Latino who gave her a quick smile. “Hello there little angel! Can I help you?”
“Is Nemo here, Mr. Sherman?” she asked, moving towards the aquarium.
“Oh, the clownfish? I’m afraid he must have escaped through the drainage, angel.”
Instead of frowning Kristel grinned, “YAY! Nemo’s free!”
Word Count: 200
Written for Sunday Photo Fiction’s prompt.
Sunday Photo Fiction is a weekly writing challenge hosted by Alastair Forbes where a photo is used as a prompt for a piece of fiction using around 200 words. The piece doesn’t have to center around exactly what the photo is, it can be just used as a basis for a story. Thank you, Al!
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April 12, 2016 at 5:48 pm
yay! what a playful take, Maria! it is a delight to read!
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April 13, 2016 at 11:18 am
YEY! Thank you, Rosema! ^^
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April 13, 2016 at 11:49 am
my pleasure, always!
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April 13, 2016 at 5:57 pm
🙂 🙂 🙂
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April 13, 2016 at 6:00 pm
❤
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April 12, 2016 at 6:23 pm
A really sweet take! 😊
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April 13, 2016 at 11:20 am
Glad to hear that. Thank you, S! 😉
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April 12, 2016 at 7:53 pm
Hee, fun 🙂
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April 13, 2016 at 11:23 am
Heehee.. ^^
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April 12, 2016 at 11:11 pm
Mine! Mine! Mine! (Sorry, you got me on a Nemo kick.) Nice story, Maria.
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April 13, 2016 at 11:40 am
HAHAHA! Nigel, my old friend! 😀
Thank you, V!
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April 16, 2016 at 7:20 pm
I should have read your comment before writing mine mine mine hehe
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April 18, 2016 at 7:23 pm
HAHA! And I should have included Nigel’s character in this story. Mine mine mine seemed to be a hit to most of you. XD
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April 21, 2016 at 8:05 am
😀
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April 16, 2016 at 7:19 pm
Oh I love it. What a great story. When the seagulls were there, I expected her to say “Mine, mine, mine” lol
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