I am Guillermo Fransisco, commanding general of the Philippine Army’s 21st division, a patriot, a family man and a drifter soul— in layman’s term, a ghost.
For seventy-four years, I’ve guarded the forts of Corregidor, watched how the remnants of our battle slowly faded through time. This place, which once served as the battleground for freedom, is now considered a heritage site. Heritage. A term for the riches of the past passed from one generation to the other. I’ve heard all the stories from the tour guides but theirs were mere versions. Nobody lived to tell how the Fall of Bataan felt like.
Or if they lived, nobody dared to remember.
In response to this week’s Friday Fictioneers prompt. Friday Fictioneers is a weekly writing challenge hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields where a photo is used as a prompt for a hundred-word piece of fiction. The photo prompt is a courtesy of J Hardy Carroll. Thank you!
I have always had an affinity to old places and heritage sites. When I saw the photo prompt, it took me instantly to the battles of Bataan and Corregidor. This story is inspired by one of the Philippines’ unforgettable event, The Fall of Bataan. Seventy-four years ago, on April 9, 1942, eighty thousand Filipino and American prisoners of war were forced to walk their Death March.
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April 9, 2016 at 5:51 pm
My uncle was at Bataan. He did not talk about it.
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April 11, 2016 at 12:21 pm
Oh, the memories mush have been hard on him. I hope he lived a happy life even so?
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April 9, 2016 at 5:53 pm
It must be strange to watch such a place change so much. Great last line!
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April 11, 2016 at 12:22 pm
It must be. Thank you, Ali! 🙂
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April 9, 2016 at 7:56 pm
This was great. Your ghostly narrator carried the story with a simple yet powerful matter-of-fact voice that demanded we pay attention. I really enjoyed reading it.
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April 11, 2016 at 12:22 pm
So glad you enjoyed it. Thank you, Thom! 🙂
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April 10, 2016 at 5:22 am
If only the ghost could tell the true story…
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April 11, 2016 at 12:25 pm
If only… but will the ghost would still want to recall such harsh memory?
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April 11, 2016 at 9:18 am
That was very nice, Maria. Your country is always warmly thought of. Bataan also means a lot to my family, my great-uncle was in that march and survived it, but died in a POW camp after. His wife, Lolita, was a Spaniard from the Philippines. She passed away early last year. My dad’s cousin, Joe, gave us a t-shirt that said they had “no mother, no father, no Uncle Sam.” Thanks for invoking the memories of those brave men. 🙂
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April 11, 2016 at 12:35 pm
Oh, I’m happy to hear that you great-uncle survived the death march. Was he able to tell the story about it? And oh, that t-shirt is… heartbreaking. Thank you, Kent!
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April 12, 2016 at 1:02 pm
Thank-YOU, Maria. 🙂
As for Charlie, no, he never said anything about it because he never made it back home. No letters, nothing. He died later after the march, probably due to complications from it. My family has a stone bench with his name on it in a war veteran’s memorial park in my town. It’s not too far from my house.
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April 12, 2016 at 2:24 am
Moving story. Thanks.
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April 12, 2016 at 2:58 pm
Thank you! ^^
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April 15, 2016 at 6:45 am
You are most welcome. I love reading about the lives of other writer’s characters.
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April 12, 2016 at 5:23 am
Dear Maria,
A good piece of history told from a fascinating point of view.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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April 12, 2016 at 3:00 pm
Thank you, Rochelle. You’ve provided an interesting prompt. 🙂
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April 13, 2016 at 12:40 am
Wow, solid work you did here. The tone and atmosphere that accompanied the voice of the drifters soul was pretty moving. Well done.
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April 13, 2016 at 11:42 am
Aww.. thank you very much for the sweet words. Glad you enjoyed this one. 🙂 ❤
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April 13, 2016 at 6:37 am
It is so difficult to write well about death, you did so very well
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April 13, 2016 at 5:54 pm
Thank you so much, Mike! This one’s close to my heart. Happy to know you enjoyed it..
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