The rising sun hung above her head and casted a shadow over the verdant greens.
“Hello, shadow, my old friend.” Bree mused, snapping a photo of her dark reflection on the ground.
It has been nine months since she started a healthy-living life. Bree dropped the junk foods, the oily and sweet treats, and even renounced cheese (the root word of her name and her most favorite thing in the world). Her journey was agonizing and almost unbearable. On some nights, in the comfort of her pillows, she condemns the world for screaming how slim is better. Since when did that define a woman’s worth, anyway?
But Bree knew better. She lived a healthy life not to join the pageantry of vanity or to impress anyone but because she owed this to herself. She worked out, running four miles on weekdays, increasing her mileage each week, not to be better than anybody else but to be a better version of herself.
As she stared at her shadow, she couldn’t help but grin. Nine months ago, she was the size of a whale shark. Her outline was a shame. But now, she has lost over 200 pounds. “Almost there,” Bree mumbled.
Word Count: 200
Written for Sunday Photo Fiction’s prompt.
Sunday Photo Fiction is a weekly writing challenge hosted by Alastair Forbes where a photo is used as a prompt for a piece of fiction using around 200 words. The piece doesn’t have to center around exactly what the photo is, it can be just used as a basis for a story. Thank you, Al!
April 7, 2016 at 3:26 pm
how i wish I can say this to myself, too. Hahaha. Great!
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April 7, 2016 at 4:55 pm
Getting there!! 😀 Hahaha
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April 7, 2016 at 5:18 pm
nope. getting farther. HAHAHA
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April 7, 2016 at 5:23 pm
Nooo. Come closeeeerr!! XD
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April 7, 2016 at 7:03 pm
Hahaha. I kenat! 😭😭😭
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April 8, 2016 at 5:14 pm
HAHA! YOu can!
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April 7, 2016 at 9:33 pm
Good for her, doing it for the right reasons. I wouldn’t have ditched the cheese, though 🙂
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April 8, 2016 at 5:48 pm
Haha! It’s tempting for sure. :S
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April 10, 2016 at 9:16 am
Great story. Although like others have said, I dont’ think I could ever get rid of cheese
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April 11, 2016 at 12:26 pm
HA! Aye to that. Thanks Al! 😀
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