Our hugs and kisses,
Sweet mem’ries;
Your hands clasped to mine.
At night I fancy
In my sleep
Fishing through my jar.
Keepsake of our love
And our smiles;
Jar of “you and I”
DAY 1: Today, I challenge you to write a lune. This is a sort of English-language haiku. While the haiku is a three-line poem with a 5-7-5 syllable count, the lune is a three-line poem with a 5-3-5 syllable count. There’s also a variant based on word-count, instead of syllable count, where the poem still has three lines, but the first line has five words, the second line has three words, and the third line has five words again.
Read more 2016 NaPoWriMo entries here!
April 1, 2016 at 3:01 pm
Awwww. This is sweet… so sweet! ❤ Lovely lune, dear Maria!
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April 1, 2016 at 11:06 pm
Awww.. thank you, Rosema! Your kind words are sweeter. ❤
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April 3, 2016 at 2:17 pm
So are you my dear! ❤
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April 1, 2016 at 10:08 pm
What a beautiful poem (and photo!) I’ve never heard of a lune before, and I didn’t realize April was NaPoWriMo! You’ve inspired me to get involved, Maria. This should be an interesting month 😉
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April 1, 2016 at 11:37 pm
Thank you! I find the photo gorgeous, too… ❤ Let's have fun, shall we?I'd be glad if you join. That is, if you're not too busy kicking life's butt! Looking forward to your posts. ^^
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April 1, 2016 at 11:40 pm
Let’s have fun indeed! I actually just posted my lune submission. I’m using poetry as one of my key weapons in kicking Life’s butt! Haha
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April 2, 2016 at 8:49 am
Beautiful Lune, “Jar of you and I.” 💕
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April 2, 2016 at 10:38 pm
Love that part, too. ❤
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April 5, 2016 at 2:04 am
Love this! 😄
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April 5, 2016 at 12:47 pm
Thank you, Jessie! ❤
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