I was once your six-year-old, messy-hair, oversized-shirt, make-believe artist back in Mrs. Grelina’s class.
“Live your dreams.” Our teacher used to say and we’d come to her class dressed as the person we would soon become. One classmate brought with her a toy stethoscope and the other wore polished suit like a business tycoon. Meanwhile, I was the quite boy acting strange and weird because that’s what I thought artists should be like—peculiar.
I remember one day, Mrs. Grelina asked me why I dreamed to be an artist. With a pencil tucked behind my ears, I told her that I wanted to impress everyone. She warmly smiled and said, “That’s a good start. But soon you will realize that art craves to express rather than impress.”
Thirty years later, I stood beside my pride during the Splash of Extraordinary Art competition. A rival artist came and gave a mocking remark. “You’ll never impress the judges with those cows, pal.”
“Maybe. But I bet they’ll never forget these for a long time.” I gladly replied.
Word Count: 175
Here is for Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers prompt. Thank you S for the photo and PJ for another fun prompt. ❤❤❤
I found myself writing another story about Mrs. Grelina and her class. I hope you don’t mind. 🙂 🙂 🙂
Enjoy more stories here:
March 30, 2016 at 1:36 pm
Ha! Nice to hear about Mrs. Grelina again. (I hope I remember it right? :D)
Such a lovely lovely take dear with lines that are so well-written! Especially this one: “But soon you will realize that art craves to express rather than impress.”
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March 30, 2016 at 1:51 pm
What a powerful message! Love it!😊
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March 30, 2016 at 7:38 pm
Aww… Glad to hear that from you, S! And thank you for the photo prompt. 😀 Are those painted cows for exhibit?
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March 30, 2016 at 10:16 pm
You’re welcome!😊 Yes! They were for an exhibition a while back!😊
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March 30, 2016 at 11:41 pm
Oh, lovely and interesting artworks! 😀 We rarely see those kinds nowadays…
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March 30, 2016 at 2:32 pm
He certainly went for “express rather than impress” with those cows 🙂
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March 30, 2016 at 7:45 pm
Most definitely! HA! 😀
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March 30, 2016 at 4:06 pm
Bravo! I love your line, “…art craves to express rather than impress” – THIS 🙂
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March 30, 2016 at 7:49 pm
Thank you, Biku! 🙂 Glad to hear that from you. ❤
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March 30, 2016 at 11:19 pm
You are very welcome – it’s my favorite new quote of the week 🙂
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March 30, 2016 at 11:38 pm
Aww… you just made me smile before I sleep. Thank you! ❤
Sweet dreams, Biku. (If it's nighttime on your end)
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March 30, 2016 at 6:43 pm
Haha, with cows like that! I’m pretty sure too the judges wouldn’t forget for a long time to come. I enjoyed reading this story Maria
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March 30, 2016 at 8:49 pm
Haha! True… The memory of his artwork would surely tickle. 😀 Happy to know you enjoyed this one, Ameena. Thank you!
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March 30, 2016 at 6:54 pm
Beautiful! 🙂
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March 30, 2016 at 8:54 pm
Thank you! 🙂
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March 30, 2016 at 8:47 pm
Mrs. Grelina sounds like a wonderful teacher! I too like her statement, “artists express rather than impress.” I disagree with the rival artists – the colorful cows are very expressive! Wonderful story, Maria! I really enjoyed it!
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March 30, 2016 at 11:48 pm
I’m sure his rival artist will soon realize what is the true meaning of art. Thank you PJ! Happy to hear that. I enjoyed this prompt too. 🙂
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March 30, 2016 at 10:39 pm
Beautifully written…. Art is expression not impression …. The message is so best…. Loved it … 🙌👌😊✨👍
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March 30, 2016 at 11:40 pm
I’m happy to hear that from you. Thank you, Prabhatks. 🙂 🙂 🙂
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March 31, 2016 at 12:45 am
Great take! You are correct no one would forget the artists cows for a very long time. They would make quite an impression in your mind 🙂
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March 31, 2016 at 11:36 am
A way of self expression that leaves a good impression to the judges. 🙂 Thanks, Mandi!
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March 31, 2016 at 3:02 am
Lovely story, and in this case I think the artist has found a way to impress as well as express! 🙂
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March 31, 2016 at 11:52 am
I believe he did find a way to do both. 😀 Thank you, Jessie!
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April 1, 2016 at 10:38 pm
Nicely written. As most others have said already, I think there is a lot of wisdom wrapped up in your express instead of impress line.
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April 1, 2016 at 11:41 pm
Thank you so much, Russell. Your words just made me smile before I sleep. 🙂
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April 1, 2016 at 11:43 pm
Sleep well.
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