It was almost midday and they’re running late. Noah and Ari are still driving to the docks where Noah’s parents waited at Island Grill for a seafood lunch.
“Baby, it’s okay. Mom already knew we’re going to be a bit late.” He kissed her hands and gave a reassuring smile.
Ari, however, is still bursting in frustration, “I can’t believe it! Of all days, how could we be stuck in the middle of the traffic now?Oh, Noah, your mom and dad must think I’m a slacker. Now my chances are absolutely ruined. Gone. I’m too plain, I’m not smart, I’m ugly, and now I’m always late. I don’t understand a thing about engineering to talk to your dad and I can’t even cook to please your mom. Maybe they’ll ask you to break up with me and find a better girlfriend. That’s it, they’ll ask you to break up with me. You deserve better. We should just break up. I-”
The car suddenly came to a shrieking stop as Noah turned and said, “I love you.”
Tears welled up in her eyes as she breathed the words in. “And I love you too.”
Love- it’s all that really matters.
Written for Sunday Photo Fiction’s prompt.
Sunday Photo Fiction is a weekly writing challenge hosted by Alastair Forbes where a photo is used as a prompt for a piece of fiction using around 200 words. The piece doesn’t have to center around exactly what the photo is, it can be just used as a basis for a story.
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February 11, 2016 at 12:12 pm
Very cute. Yes, she found out in the end what is really important to her partner and too his parents — that he has a girl who loves him for being him.
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February 12, 2016 at 9:17 pm
Yes, and their love, more than anything else, is what really matters. Thank you, Mandi! 😀
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February 11, 2016 at 12:29 pm
Awww. *smiling-teary-eyed sigh*
This is so heartfelt, Maria! Sometimes ladies like us have some insecurities and the best thing is that we let it all out. We don’t keep it. Just like what Ari did. 🙂 I am just so inlove with how Noah comforts her. Love is all that matters, eh? 😀 ❤ 😀
P.S.
When I first read it I thought it was Noah and Ali instead of Ari! 😀 😀 😀 (That's why I thought this is somehow inspired by Nicholas Sparks' epic love story The Notebook. ❤
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February 11, 2016 at 9:43 pm
Sweet story! And a very realistic portrayal of that dreaded first meeting 🙂
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February 12, 2016 at 9:19 pm
That first meeting is what most of us girls are afraid of. It’s like THE judgment day. HAHA. Thank you, Ali! 😀
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February 11, 2016 at 10:48 pm
Awww! This was really sweet! Noah is a keeper! 😊💞
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February 12, 2016 at 9:20 pm
Oh, he is! He is! I’ve always loved such scene. A guy reassuring the girl with just those three words. YAY! 😀 ❤
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February 12, 2016 at 3:02 am
Poor thing, she let those doubts and fears cloud her mind. Love truly is what matters. Lovely story!
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February 12, 2016 at 9:23 pm
First meetings with the parents could sometimes be a frightening thought I guess. But just like what the song says, love is all that matters. 😀 Thank you, PJ! 🙂 🙂
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February 12, 2016 at 9:38 am
Yup, in the end love is all that matters. A story written in the sweet style that you’re so good at, Maria!
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February 12, 2016 at 9:26 pm
Aye! Like the song… love is all that matters. 😀 Awwee, thank you Jade. Your sweet tale inspired me to writing this, too. Thank you! 🙂 🙂 🙂
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February 13, 2016 at 8:51 am
It did? Aww, that flatters me to know my story provided a little inspiration. Thank you for making my day, and doing such great justice!
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February 14, 2016 at 2:27 pm
Yes! I love reading happy and inspiring stories such as yours. Thank you, too. And oh, happy valentines Jade! 😀 😀
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February 15, 2016 at 7:08 am
I also love reading inspiring stories and happy endings. Happy valentine’s Day to you too Maria!
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February 13, 2016 at 10:41 am
Nice story. I can certainly relate to that first meeting of the parents! All kinds of things go through your mind! But, with his support, that makes it easier.
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February 14, 2016 at 2:46 pm
Oh, I hope your experience was a memorable one Jessie. 😀 And I believe your someone was just as supportive as well. 😀
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February 14, 2016 at 6:15 am
The first meeting… it is crazy for both! Well done!!!
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February 14, 2016 at 2:56 pm
Hmm… I didn’t think of the guy’s side. But now that you mentioned it, I wonder?
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February 14, 2016 at 10:01 am
Aww wow. I love it. That first meeting with parents is a terror, even if you are on time. I remember the first one with my ex-wife. At least the fact that they love each other, nothing else really matters.
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February 14, 2016 at 2:59 pm
Oh, both of you must be agitated and nervous? Yes, as long as they are both in love, nothing else really does matters. 😀
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February 14, 2016 at 8:05 pm
We were. But more nervous about meeting my parents. Although when we got divorced, she tried to introduce her new bloke to my parents. LOL
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