This was his favorite kind of morning, sharing a good laugh with his wife while walking hand in hand around the farmhouse. No, they’re not newlyweds but Marta and John lived every single day of their forty years as if they are.
While having occasional banters on the roadside, John caught a glimpse of his 1930 vintage truck near the barn. He couldn’t help but smile.
“Here we go again…” Marta faked annoyance as her husband led her to the truck. He crawled under the chassis as if a mechanic trying to fix a troubled car. Of course the truck wouldn’t start, every tire was either short on air or completely flat, but they used to fool around it on some mornings.
“Remember how we first met?” John asked.
She opened the car’s hood and bent as low as she could so as to meet his smiling eyes. “Uhmm… not really,” she lied, “but I remember kissing a gorgeous guy who once fixed my car.”
Marta then tilted and gave him a good morning kiss.
Word Count: 175
Here is for Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers prompt. This photo prompt from pixabay reminds me of country life and of sweet, loving old couples. ❤ 🙂
Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers is a weekly writing challenge where a photo is used as a prompt for a piece of fiction using 150 (+/- 25 words). Thanks for another fun prompt, PJ! 😀
Enjoy more stories here:
February 3, 2016 at 1:29 pm
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeehhh! ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤
I can't contain the kilig, Maria! I cannot! (In a good way, alright? :D)
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February 3, 2016 at 3:44 pm
Thanks a lot, Rosema! Since it’s February, I’m hoping to write love stories for my fictions this month, so far I’ve done two. *Fingers crossed* 😀 YAY! ❤ ❤ ❤
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February 5, 2016 at 10:36 am
Yes, you’ve done two great love stories! Can you share to me some of your loving aura? I’ve written three poems this week, (not posted), and they are all about pain. Argh! What’s happening to me! 😀
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February 5, 2016 at 11:04 am
Here you go… ❤ ❤ ❤
Oh, I've always believed that those who knows how to love deeply knows how the worst pain must feel like. 😀 Looking forward to reading them, Rosema. 🙂 🙂
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February 5, 2016 at 1:38 pm
Oh, Maria! Thank you! I hope I can write something cheesy next week! (sigh)
But it surely makes sense, there is no love without pain. 😀
#sentimode? LOL
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February 5, 2016 at 1:51 pm
Oh, surely, you can. 🙂 😀 And I’m looking forward to that.
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February 5, 2016 at 2:05 pm
Hmmmm… I schedule a poem that will be posted later and it is just… sad.
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February 5, 2016 at 3:33 pm
Will be waiting for it! 😀
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February 5, 2016 at 4:17 pm
I hope it will not make you sad again…
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February 5, 2016 at 4:41 pm
Hmm… I’ll,
…prepare my heart then.
And some tissue, maybe?
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February 5, 2016 at 5:06 pm
Nope! I changed my mind. I want to end the week with something light, and I want to make it up to you after I made you sad with my Sunflower flash fiction. I moved the sad poem for Sunday. A lighter story will be posted soon. 😀
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February 5, 2016 at 5:30 pm
Awwe… you’re the sweetest and most thoughtful. :* ❤ I've just read it and I love it! I love every part of it. 😀 😀
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February 5, 2016 at 5:37 pm
HAHA! Been causing you pain while you’ve been giving me kilig! HAHA. So it’s time to giveback! 😀
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February 3, 2016 at 2:26 pm
Lovely.
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February 3, 2016 at 3:36 pm
Thank you! 😀
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February 3, 2016 at 2:46 pm
awesome check out mine
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February 3, 2016 at 3:17 pm
I like the romance, gentle and sweet.
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February 3, 2016 at 3:37 pm
Glad you like it! Thank you, Sam. 😀
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February 3, 2016 at 4:26 pm
Sweet story, what a lovely couple 🙂
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February 4, 2016 at 12:13 pm
A lovely couple, they are… Thanks, Ali! 🙂
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February 3, 2016 at 6:56 pm
Sweet!💕
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February 4, 2016 at 12:18 pm
YAY! Thanks for taking the time to read. ❤
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February 4, 2016 at 1:04 am
So touching! An older couple who are still very much in love. I love it! Great story Maria!
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February 4, 2016 at 12:25 pm
Yes! Isn’t it heartwarming to see an old couple still so much in love after all these years? 😀 Thanks, PJ!
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February 4, 2016 at 8:10 pm
Yes! It gives the younger folks hope!
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February 5, 2016 at 10:26 am
Yes! And a glimpse of an endless love. 😀
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February 5, 2016 at 10:28 am
Yes! My aunt and uncle use to hug each other and hold hand right up until they passed away. It was so sweet to see.
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February 5, 2016 at 10:45 am
Awwee that is so sweet. It reminds me of Nicholas Sparks’ The Notebook. ❤ ❤
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February 5, 2016 at 10:49 am
I haven’t read that book but it sounds really sweet.
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February 5, 2016 at 11:10 am
Oh it’s a beautiful, tear-jerking book about a true love withstanding status in life, age, time, and Alzheimer. They made it into a movie which is equally heartbreaking and heartwarming. 🙂 🙂
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February 5, 2016 at 11:25 am
Oh, I will have to see the movie. 🙂
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February 5, 2016 at 12:05 pm
Yes! Please do. 😀 It’s a very lovely movie…
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February 4, 2016 at 1:16 am
I like the how the story describes them walking around the farm and then coming to the old car. And leaning in for a kiss. 🙂
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February 4, 2016 at 4:55 am
Aww, your stories are always super sweet!
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February 4, 2016 at 12:27 pm
And you comments are super sweet too! Thank you, Jade! 😀 ❤
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February 4, 2016 at 12:52 pm
This is so well written and descriptive of place and character. Very much enjoyed this one.
I think that a great idea to write love stories during February.
Ellespeth
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February 4, 2016 at 3:56 pm
Glad you enjoyed it Ellespeth. 🙂 I really hope I’d be able to write love stories during the month, too. ❤
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February 4, 2016 at 1:43 pm
Such a lovely story! They sound like a very sweet couple and you did a great job in relaying that. 🙂
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February 4, 2016 at 3:59 pm
Thank you, Jessie. Old couples do make the sweetest sights. 😀
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February 5, 2016 at 2:28 am
Sweet little story, Maria. Who says romance is only for the young? For John and Marta, romance is still going strong,
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February 5, 2016 at 10:32 am
Thank you, Millie. It’s really heartwarming to see such beautiful love story in real life. 😀
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February 5, 2016 at 10:43 pm
That’s very true. 🙂
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February 5, 2016 at 11:49 pm
🙂 🙂
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February 6, 2016 at 8:21 am
So sweet, after all these years! No wonder he keeps the car 🙂
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February 6, 2016 at 10:58 am
Awwee I guessing it’s one of their greatest treasures. After all, it all started with a troubled car. 🙂 🙂 Glad you liked it, Mandi.
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February 8, 2016 at 7:06 pm
Sweet romance 🙂
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February 8, 2016 at 11:00 pm
Thank you, Jaq. 🙂 🙂
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February 9, 2016 at 12:46 am
My pleasure Maria 🙂
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