I have told you so,
Didn’t I? That I love you
Oh, most ardently
If you only take the time
To see with your heart, not mind
I have told you, too
Didn’t I? That I would stay
‘Til the end of time
If you only take the risk
And give this true love a chance
I have always said,
Didn’t I? I’ll prove you wrong
And I’ll hold those hands
Make you trust in love again
We won’t be broken though bent
And I will tell you
Over and over, my love
You are my beloved
Until these words pierce through you
Until you love me back, too
And my late posts for Writing 101: Poetry continues. Prompt 7 is a courtesy of Vijaya Sundaram. My hopeless romantic soul dance in glee for this prompt. I think I may have been a man in my past life for I could write poems from a man’s perspective. 😀 YAY!~
Day 7: Beloved
Something about the very word “beloved” causes a frisson in us. Out of the people that matter to you, who matters the most? Whom do you love, or whom have you loved more than anyone else? What does the word “beloved” summon up in your imagination? What songs, poems, stories, movies spring to mind? Who is your beloved?
Today, write a poem celebrating your beloved. It does not have to be a specific person — you could address an imaginary beloved from the future who’s waiting for you. You could take on the persona of a well-known mythological or historic character and address her or his beloved in your poem. You could create a new type of lover and beloved.
January 19, 2016 at 10:01 am
I love the way you used “Didn’t I” repeatedly in the poem. I can feel the depth and strong reassurance in the poem too…well done! 🙂
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January 19, 2016 at 12:03 pm
Sometimes, when we’re too scared to jump, all we need is a reassurance. Don’t we? 😀 Thanks a lot, Deb. Glad you liked it. 🙂
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January 19, 2016 at 7:35 pm
Yes, you are right. 😊
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January 19, 2016 at 11:00 pm
Beautiful poem Maria. 🙂
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January 20, 2016 at 11:20 am
Thanks, PJ! 😀 😀
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January 20, 2016 at 11:21 am
My pleasure!
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January 22, 2016 at 2:08 pm
The thing that I was telling you last night (if only the call was not cut off hahahaha), this poem just summarized it.
It pains to know that the person I like doesn’t like me back.. Arrrrffff!
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February 4, 2021 at 8:16 pm
Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet and commented:
Come Enjoy This!!
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