If the Earth is heaven and tears
Are glee, would you still fear?
If past is present and bad
Is good and those we call ‘sad’
Cease to exist, would things be clear?
If bland is sweet and beauty
Is flawed and I am you as you are me
Would it truly be fair?
Would it end despair?
Would we finally live in peace and serenity?
Our Writing 201 Day 4 assignment brought me back to my aimless musing of ‘what ifs’. But personally, I think perfection is a matter of POV– and so does imperfection. Now, for the late entry, here’s my take. 🙂
Prompt: Imperfect
Form: Limerick
Device: Enjambment
DoodleScribbles 
October 9, 2015 at 12:40 pm
Interesting concept and thoughts!
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October 9, 2015 at 3:19 pm
Thank you, Jacqueline. 🙂
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October 9, 2015 at 4:55 pm
You are welcome 🙂
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October 9, 2015 at 12:56 pm
wow, I really like this, thank you!
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October 9, 2015 at 3:21 pm
Hi Kate, thanks for dropping by! Glad you liked it. 🙂
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October 9, 2015 at 5:16 pm
You are deep maria! Great!
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